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07-22-04, 10:43 PM | #1 | ||||
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IP: 5E4C 9537
CHOURUS:
tree to rope. rope to neck. neck to body. body to ground. we insane~ BLANK to mic. mic to CD. CD To stereo. stereo to sound. we insane~ bullet to clip. clip to gun. gun to head. no body found. we insane~ van to road. road to kid. kid to van. hostage bound. we insane~ got mad broke a rod off a pegged leg chair~ end result resulted in blood stained hair~ dug a hole in the forest. the body lies there~ eyes still open lookin with a blank stare~ while the blood puddles. warping the abused chair~ when asked about it i act like dont no. but do care~ you can search the house till the place is stripped bare~ just ignore the bloody footprints leadin upstairs~ and forget bout the bloody gloves. i got 3 pairs~ and those stained curtians in the tub. just leave em there~ and the gun in the drower aint mine officer. i swear~ besides. i was outside all day. in a lawn chair~ drawin blueprints for my secret underground lair~ while sippin lemonade. breathin in the fresh air~ with my best friend. a transvestite named clair~ sittin for four hours straight. playin solitare~ ok fine. i did kill her. but it was a double dogg dare~ here. give her family my lunch money. cause thats all im willin ta spare~ CHOURUS ( 2X ) this shyts crazy~ like a lately. premature baby~ in a wheelchair tryin ta chase me~ with no legs tryin ta race me~ while the doctor video tapes me~ two days later i showed up at the hospital with a 45 calliber colt~ and the other two hundred and twenty-five members of my cult~ tried to shoot her but the bullet hit the wheelchair~ then it bounced off the wall and took the left side of my hair~ now i was pissed. clenched up two fists. and knocked her out that wheel chair~ drug her down the hall to roll her down the top floor stairs~ then i was in court 3 months later. now the jury had ta vote~ somehow the judge says drugs caused the result~ like the time aleins told me to empty the bank vault~ and when i tried to sell kokain to the pope~ and tied the neighbors dog to a tree with some rope~ plus the time i drilled holes in ya boat~ then sent your dead family a pissed on sympothy note~ my morning breakfasts laced with PCP and coke~ so the judge let me off with mental instability~ figured there was no sense in killin me~ kause im gunna get caught again when asked to fill the cup with pee~ but come one man. you gotta have some sympothy~ my brains rotted out from this hip-hop R&B~ maybe if i ask nice. hell think twice. and let the charges drop off of me~ but wouldnt wait for it. no sense in holdin my breath~ but if he dose lock me up i cant get blamed if someone else hapeens to beat him to death~ CHOURUS ( 2X ) just some stupid shyt. im new to the site so let me no what ya think? -"BLANK" |
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07-23-04, 01:49 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: EC0B 84C7
i liked da chorus n da 1st verse
but da 2nd kind drew me away i like da song but i think u should change da 2nd verse n make it sound betta |
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07-23-04, 02:24 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 5E4C 9537
yea i feel you on that. thanks for the feedback.
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07-23-04, 02:26 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
yeah shit was made aiight........chorus was nice......first verse was aiight...nothing special...2nd just didn't work homie revise that ish.........Keep droppin
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