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07-24-04, 04:09 PM
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AutoMATIK™ vs Justify
IP: 23CC 11AC
5 barz
due in 15min after check I'll drop after you...good luck |
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07-24-04, 04:11 PM
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©Lyrical Masterpiece©
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IP: C827 90D1
alright, im checkin in..no feedin tho...good luck to you too
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07-24-04, 04:23 PM
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©Lyrical Masterpiece©
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IP: C827 90D1
Comin after ya quick like im a serial Killa
They call me a fake, wont find anyone reala Ruthless aggression, ready to justify the reason Ya throwin weaker than Pee-wee herman durin flu season My lyrical virtuosity will have your head spinnin Have ya shoutin in tongues like a reverend Got ya runnin fast and im quick to pursuit Punches so lame you'll be livin in ridicule The win is automatic, even tho some people doubt but this verse that im droppin is what rb's all about Weak...i know..oh well, good luck |
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07-24-04, 04:52 PM
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IP: 23CC 11AC
I On A Higher Spill … My Verse Eats Niggas Like It’s ‘Hungry For Dudes’
This Battles Done, And You Answerin My Callout Like It’s ‘Funny To Lose’ I Spit More Heat To ‘Blast Satin’ … That’ll Leave Yo Eyes Smaller That ‘Fat Asians’ Gangsta ?? Your Only Gun Fights Are With Premium Pumps At ‘Gas Stations’ I’ll Silenced Yo Squad … You Aint Hot Dawg, All These Niggas Is ‘Bluffin’ I Got Punchez That’ll Leave Yo Ass Underground Like ‘Harriet Tubman’ Why ‘Bother Me’ … You Not As ‘Hard As Me” I Do Severer Shit Like a’ Heart Disese’ Or I’ll Open Yo Body And Clog All Yo ‘Arteries’ Until It’s ‘Hard To Breathe’ Fnish So “Who You Testin”? You’re Just Anotha Fan On My “Intestines” I’ll Peel Off Yo Head to leave you “restin” . “And To Fnish I Use Smith-n-‘Wessons” to Blow Yo “Chest In” Not Too Good Of a verse … Cant Really Think Right now Uppin for vote … |
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07-24-04, 05:17 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 862F C65B
lets be real wit it for a moment...this was a easy win for automatik...his punches were harder, and the structure of his flow hit too.
justify's shit was tight, but choppy-he dont know how to put the rhymes together to make em sound coo (proof read yo shit first) but imma give this vote to autoMATIK-easy ya'll hit up the battles in my sig |
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07-24-04, 05:23 PM
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IP: 23CC 11AC
aiight ... still uppin this shit ...
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07-24-04, 05:54 PM
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
Justify
structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...no good wordplay...a few of ur punchesa connected, at best...no good personals... AutoMATIK™ structure is good...flow is on target as well...u had a few multis...wordplay was tight...most of ur punches connected....personals were pretty good... Overall both had a good structure...both had a good flow...AutoMATIK™ had more multis...better wordplay...as well as more connecting punches and better personals...so basing off of that...AutoMATIK™ gets my vote... VOTE - AUTOMATIK |
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07-24-04, 06:37 PM
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Detrimental Thoughts
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IP: FE02 6F02
AutoMATIK™ you had some goood punches...a lot of them connected....i liked your flow...pretty nice...your word play was good...so was your flow...i think you won this easily
Justify- you were good....nice flow and shit...word play ok...your punches pretty much missed...but you was still good v/AutoMATIK™
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07-24-04, 06:40 PM
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IP: 23CC 11AC
uppin ...
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07-24-04, 07:21 PM
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IP: 23CC 11AC
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07-24-04, 07:24 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Justify- No Hard Hitting Punches... Flow Was Ok.. Structure Wasnt To Good... Wordplay Not To Good, No Metaz, Or Multis... Overal Verse.. Not To Good
Automatik- Better Everything Pretty Much, Punches Hit Alot Harder, Multis Were There... Structure Was Good... Overal Better Verse Than Justifys Punches- Automatik Flow- Automatik Metaz- Niether Multis- Automatik Wordplay- Automatik Structure- Automatik Originality- Tie Final Vote------ Automatik 1 Sided Battle In My Eyes.... Return Favor And Vote Fairly On My Battle.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137169
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07-24-04, 08:16 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 3375 4717
Automatik: man your punches were good, wordplay good, structure ok... man you have a great verse...
Justify: man not a good verse alot of weak punches wordplay off, you need some elevating though V/ Automatik Yo automatik you owe a vote to the battle Lyrical Onslaught Vs Manipulation i voted on your tag team battle and you never voted on the battle... please return the favor with an honest vote http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136736
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Guess who?... ...Paramik Fuckin'...
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07-24-04, 08:35 PM
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©Lyrical Masterpiece©
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IP: 4550 84E0
Yeah, thanks for the honest votes..I knew I wouldnt win this one Automatik is a pretty good mc, nice battle Auto..someone finish this last vote up, thanks
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07-24-04, 09:00 PM
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IP: E198 D20B
Autmatik..
You had some good stucture, an easy to read flow.. some of the punches were pretty decent too.. you're multies were better with better wordplay.. and as far as overall enjoyability, I liked reading it.. Justify, man.. u got merked.. u need to elevate.. your stucture was ok but no good punches.. you didn't hit hard with any personals, no good rhyme scheme.. your verse sucked major ass dude.. so u lost, i vote for automatik as the winner.. Automatik I think that your punches hit harder and were funnier, so you got it.. justify, u are kinda weak man, u need to elevate.. V/automatik return favor wit a vote in my battle, wiil you? http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136734 |
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