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07-23-04, 02:12 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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skool house rock
IP: EC0B 84C7
im justa bill sittin on capital hill wit a deal
since 2+2=4 dat mean im fuckin 4real so just CHILL like MR. FREEZE cuz ima BIG MAC like miky deez(macdonalds) garuntee dat girl in 1st period wantin sum of me to see me KEYS like ALICIA2 open da door 4 felicia 2 my home 2 give me sum knowledge on spanish1ba i kno math so i don't need a visa 4 a cash exchange n unlike da scare crow i already got sum brains made me a name of popularity so everybody stare at me so im like twista but i made myself n overnite celebrity heavily i nda mix wit chicks i think is fine n since im in da newspaper i b blowin dey minds outta time im neva wit mine cuz im always busy my life fly by so fast it'll leave yo ass dizzy 4give me if i enjoy my time in highskool but like LUDACRIS said all i do is ACT A FOOL yo vote 4 sum of my battles amayze vs forgotten flow http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031 2hard2lose http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 murda-gram http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506 novakane http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749 peace |
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07-23-04, 03:20 AM
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#2
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IP: 23CC 11AC
this is mad whack ... you got alot of elevating to do dawg
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07-23-04, 04:36 AM
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As Seen On T.V.
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IP: 8213 3797
ay wanna be im my crew? haha rolf...sike
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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07-23-04, 01:31 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: EC0B 84C7
yo fuck both ya if i wasn'y in 4
battles i wood beat both of ya's asses |
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07-23-04, 01:48 PM
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IP: 23CC 11AC
you cant take feedback you should post open mics...
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07-27-04, 02:36 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: EC0B 84C7
flow was aight i kinda like it
nice job but it might need a lil more work but keep workin on it PIMP OUT |
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07-27-04, 03:07 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 4289 77F4
That was a very simplistic verse, nice flow to it/
But there is much more you can do to make it better/ Use better words, and multis in it and you will have a really hott verse man/ Keep elevatin, I give it a 6.5/10 man/ |
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07-27-04, 03:10 PM
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#8
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Banned
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IP: 19F7 7629
this was a simple but decent flow to it,
ya lines was average above basic i like how u fliped a few lines creative was average but all around not bad... 6.5 outta 10 keep droping them |
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07-27-04, 03:11 PM
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#9
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Banned
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IP: 19F7 7629
hey also can u drop fedd back on my diss to forgetten flow pt2...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137793 thanks alot man.... |
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