John Adams (Keystyle)

Collided with true stress while he guided the U.S. through
Hard times, odd climbs in our economy less jobs as stress grew
Fast like grass with jointed stems folks disappointed him unrest overdue
Lived in a nice resident was the first vice president to impress few
Under George Washington, he prevail with Abigail Smith so reverent
As his wife, his speeches a weapon relevant as the second president
Whack to say back in the day no fun man everything done by hand
Lived from 1735 to 1826 born in Braintree mass. A plain and free past with one plan
To change this nation and heal the strange situation still exists
From British rule, succeeding bold to play leading role in the complex twist
Of the option and the adoption of the Declaration of Independence which piss
The British off, help design and step to sign the document

this was nice,
u stood on topic which was kinda hard for someone like me to do * at-less this one *
u had creative lines ya flow was good but some places it kinda fell of then got back to good, i just like what u did here good job,

8.0 outta 10

peep my new diss pt3...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137994

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