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Old 07-30-04, 08:15 PM   #1
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life a serious game that must b played, but y ppl gota die jus cus they got they life made,
y ppl gota take a life cus they ruined there life y they gota pull out a knife n y they get to live n the otha cant stay alive?,
growin up hearin screams in da street, hearin call da cops my childs gettin beat,
y ppl gota die cus of otha ppls insecurtitys n fears, r they there wen the mothas r shedin tears?,
no n y evry time i turn on da news i hear black on black crime, n i hear bout anotha person who gota serve time,
turn on cnn n see ppl killin ppl n faces of victims of murder, here bout a gurl gettin raped y wud that man hurt her?,
2 kids shot on their pourch cus of the clothes they were wearin, gangstas wantin to kill cus of hurt or jus not carin,
go to da park its dark jus playin round car rolls up windows go down headlights go out evry1 begins to shout tires schreech car goes fast guns cum up n u see them blast lonly kid standin there scared cus its dark n then in a second a bullet flyes thru the middle of his heart,
ne reason for the killin no of course not, ppl get mad ova shit that otha got,
n sumtiems they dont evn no da person jus to b koo they pull da trigga n then boom theres a anoutha lost body n sum think its aprt of the party n sum do it to fit in n wen he gets locked up olda dudes guna hit him,
u eva lost sumbody? i doubt it, i lost an uncle to his best frend now u tell me bout it.
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Old 07-30-04, 08:16 PM   #2
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judge dis for me
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Old 07-30-04, 08:25 PM   #3
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Old 07-30-04, 09:08 PM   #4
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Old 07-30-04, 11:52 PM   #5
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dam is it really dat bad?, how can i fix my rym style up?, thx for judgin it 4 me tho
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