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Old 07-10-04, 02:37 AM   #1
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Terrorism ft Lethal Lunatic

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Humanity recently encountered an enemy
And fell victim to its sick pysichotic mentality
Cause its only belief is to die for a cause
So it makes no misstakes and it has no flaws.

What it creates has only one name which is described as terror.
What it lacks most in its actions is the thing called error.
It is a living nightmare for all public security
And we could only stop it if we form an unity,
If we could all shout loud so that it could hear us
It might see our determination and begin to fear us.
Yet if we only hide and pray it doesn't hit us
We would all go down a whole, ripped apart and feet first.
It is called TERRORISM and kills our urban peace,
It destroyed thousands of lives and doesn't seem to cease,
It deserves a darkned place in our global history,
It will be always regreted by us and our comunity.

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Just like terrorism hip hop terrorized
The young children who watch and tries not to cry
To hard but figures out that they’re livin in the devil’s eye
thugs thinks that they can neva die, dictators tries to lie
Lie you into terrorism just waitin to be
Me and terrorism are alike blinded not able to see
That we cause destruction, physically and emotionally
But not just to us but the kids who actually looks up at me
We create massive destruction even hip hop artist
Like hip hop now life is endin into the hands of terrorist
Terrorist, kills more people than the ones on the injured list
We need not to have an open hand but to unite to hit wit a fist
Terrorist is just the beginnin of the end
Life is hard your not even able to trust a friend
Life only happens once here and it doesnt happen again
For the world it’s the gun in the hand for me it’s the paper and the pen
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Old 07-10-04, 04:19 AM   #2
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Old 07-10-04, 04:35 AM   #3
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yup uppin for some feed back on this please
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Old 07-10-04, 11:52 AM   #4
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Old 07-10-04, 12:38 PM   #5
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it wasn't the best thing i heard but it was good. i personnal liked Lethal Lunatic's shit better but it was all good.

best line:We create massive destruction even hip hop artist
Like hip hop now life is endin into the hands of terrorist

one thing i didn't like was that it wasn't always about terrorism. stay focused. it was pretty good 1
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Old 07-10-04, 12:58 PM   #6
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I was tryin to compare hip hop wit terrorism but thnx for the feed back
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Old 07-10-04, 01:05 PM   #7
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i like the comparisons you was makin between hiphop and terrorism, i dont know if interpreted right but i like how yall were talkin about how hiphop music effects kids, especially the young ones who are real impressionable. the rhymes was hot but like the other dude said it wasn't real focused, but i understand what yall was trying to say, hot shit
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Old 07-10-04, 03:25 PM   #8
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Old 07-10-04, 03:29 PM   #9
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iight yea wasnt my best but uppin for some more feed back
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Old 07-10-04, 03:35 PM   #10
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Same here that wasnt my best either
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Old 07-10-04, 04:15 PM   #11
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good, liked the flow and structure, although it did get a lil off track
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Old 07-10-04, 04:19 PM   #12
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yea okay anyways ... uppin for some more feed dont sleep
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Old 07-11-04, 08:35 PM   #13
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Old 07-11-04, 09:53 PM   #14
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arite arite, this was very good material i like most of the bars the ending especially impressed me, i mean the vocab was above average but if yall had put more time into it im sure it could have been phenomenal...anyways i still liked this peace as a whole, innovative subject and whatnot, keep it up
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Old 07-11-04, 10:02 PM   #15
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it was good but i thought it was a lil weak for u 2 overall good though betta than average pc
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