Just something to pass the time and display my level to ya'll.

Listen
I'm not here to prove myself... or here to brag and shit//
I'm only here to let ya'll people know... I came here talented//
No MSG, preservatives... Or any additives//
No bullshit... I'm only here with what I have to give//
And what I have to give... really isn't much but I try for mine//
I'm not the nicest myself... But I help those who try to rhyme//
Simply put... I don't try to be cocky diss you unprovoked//
I came here with the intention... to make each one of you my folk//
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Hmmm. That was weak. I can't even continue that shit. Criticism is welcome. Good or bad, whatever.
one.

First Half Was Decent, And Second Half Was Ok, It Flowed Good Halfway Through, And Than You Changed It And It Still Flowed I Just Like How You Kept Rhymin Off Your Last Line.... Structure Would Be better if You Formatted it More Even, Other Than That Not Bad... Str8 Piece....

Peep my drop : key'....

peace

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Good looks. I'll check that now.

ahh,you were bored tryin ta pass da time,not bad i think ya honesty is what alot of other cats should try,nice though............i think ya should said unless provoked instead of unprovoked,nahh whateva decent drop homz........
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