iight u challenged me u spit first....
8 linez cuz i dont feel like batelin but u buggin
no feedin no d/r
explain votes....
check in and verses due 1 hour later~~~

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yo im they best rapa pleez read the name.. u need the lord so pleez leave this game.. dont keep it ya flows akin already ya whole album bout to flop jus like belly... c'mon no lets be logical kid......il have you in holes like sadam huisans kids .....but i keep flowin all ya bars is hurtin rap like a bitch u whip out two inches like pee wee herman.... wow now i know you jus got ripped you straight ass you know you got me pissed... im only the best n i need mo you get ya ass beat this friday jus lke Debo .....see me killa dont talk bout the guns here cuz u aint no thug i see you watching the carebears back to ya blok come on man i came half ass thats rippable./

im checkin in~~i was kinda busy.....ill have my verse up in about 5 minutes~~1~~

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fuck your bullshit rap, filled wit fakeness,embroiled attacks/
metaphorical slaps, battle hi-jacks and fake comebacks/
youll lose in this battle of wits ill make dat a promise/
big talk but no balls - comin weak like you on anabolics/
I Shoot-Pegs for Breakfest leaving ya with Two-Eggs,
I Strapped on Shin Pads Knowing ur only good for boot-legs/
You rhymin hot? Damn, thats what I call a straight myth/
cuz ur brain iz da "size of a pickle"since ill throw a fit u got 2 "dill" wit/


***explanations***
boot-legs.....word play...boot-legs-buy sumthin cheap,im sayin hes poor.
Dill-the brand of the pickle..i said his brain da size of a pickle.....

VOTE UP!!!!

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up up uppin dis battle....dis nigga kept buggin me 4 a battle so i gave it 2 em....ill return da favor just drop a link...

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yo GRE man u really need 2 elevate... i hated your structure alot.... and your flow was bad... but that was prolly just cuz of your structure... i aint gonna talk shit cuz u new and alota ppl do that when they start off... but you'll learn... but u shouldn't have challenged DAILLISET so early... u should've battle other rookies... well its kool tho, but u did lose this battle yo... but hey ds only one battle... just challenge alotta newbs and shit 2 straitin yo record up like sum of deez vets on here .....


DAILLEST/ nice verse man, tho i liked your other battles better it was still tight, flow was good but you / messee up your structure a lil bit... but u still got my vote/ DAILLEST

yo im uppin 4 sum votes on diz shot....dont want it takin forever

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im up up uppin 4 sum votes 2 get dis battle dealt wit....holla.....

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best rappereva needs to practice, i dont want to bash you cause thats not the purpose of this site,the purpose is to elevate ya skills
thats what you need to focus
daillest came harder had wordplay, multi's, metas,
the structure towards the end was a little hard but shit happens
this is onesided, no hate,just honesty return your honesty here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136172

vote up~~tryin 2 get this closed~~vote vote vote vote~~this is election day yo~~~vote~~

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im not voting on this you niggas is both in my crew im aganist this

BeStRaPaEVER
structure is wack as fuck man...seperate ur lines, dont write them i paragraphs...flow fell off due to the wackness in structure...no multis...wack wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

daillest1
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure was good...flow was on target...u had a few multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personals..daillest had the better structure...the more stable flow...more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...daillest1 gets my vote...

VOTE - DAILLEST1

damn thats funny man 3-0 haha hey whateva any one wanna battle me im praying come at me make that an option cuz i will rip i was jus fuckin wit this lil nigga im sayin
niggas wanna know it will be shown kid come on

Joey C. LDU BACK TO YA BLOCK!!

bestrapperever: aight well structure screwed it up because
it got much harder to read in my opinion.......................
flow could of been better also sort of choppy-ish like.....
some punches did connect but not most.....................
and not all original.......................................... .........

daillest1: structure made it more readable so thats good..
flow was there I liked it syllable was on point................
punches did connect almost all of them......................
some original some not.............................................

overall: I say the daillest1 took it with a better drop...

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