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07-26-04, 04:54 PM
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"Click Clack"
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(L.V) LyricalOnslaught Vs Revoke (T.I)
IP: D7D1 F3FF
10-12 lines no feeding recycling no crew votes check-in verses due by thursday
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07-27-04, 02:19 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 07C8 9C8D
iiight with the rules
this aint my check in im just agreeing to your rules and ill have my lines due at thursday morning
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07-28-04, 06:25 PM
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#3
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 07C8 9C8D
Check in...
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07-28-04, 10:29 PM
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#4
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"Click Clack"
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IP: 899F 26A3
check
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07-29-04, 11:56 AM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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Start Writing
IP: 07C8 9C8D
Superior? Challenging me, this fucking lightweight has no chances. He is so fucking stupid, instead of circular “flow”, he “square dances.” Superior already has been dragging some lines to the recycling bin. Plus, Superior couldn’t ever win, even if he took strengthening vitamins. Says he’s what links everything together?, I’ll rip you off the chain. Remove you like a stain, cut off your circulation like a busted vein. Next I’ll cut your jugular vein, and melt you with my spits of acid rain. Or I could “drink this guy up” as if he were wine or champagne. Changing his name to ...Superior.., Revoke must be a fucking pussy. Superiors’ bars are full of nuts, like a box that’s filled with Chewy. Once I’m through with this fake “ILL” shit, you’d be a rotten fruit. Their crew must be horny, to add this fucking pussy in their recruit. |
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07-29-04, 01:35 PM
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"Click Clack"
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IP: 6247 B101
Comin at Superior you need some elevated material Before I milk this win… and celebrate it with cereal… Your history, sayin anything goes..Hope you got insurance.... Cause if you went with the flow you'd get lost in the current.!! Checkout SUP in the zone… don’t wanna spit and get blown? Shit I can fuck you up with what text I can fit in my phone!!! Hold on! (LOL) I got another one… u know he a thug right? Instead of Pac’s tat? Where his stomach at it says “A Bug’s Life”!!!* hate your crew strobe should ban yall with a desparted distribution, And the only heads you make move are in a retarded institution... Your sig is true, your posioning RV with your skill…Wack!** You beating me is like midgets doing the high jump lets leave it at that *look at his rapper **scroll up to see his sig
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07-29-04, 02:05 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 07C8 9C8D
ok now let the votes come in
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07-29-04, 02:19 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 426C 02AF
Ok, i was feelin both dropz but i Onslaught came harda wit dem punchez. They was ill kid. Flow waz good by both an both had good wordplay.
Opener-On slaught( feelin tha punch) Closer-Superior( feelin tha personal) Flow- onslaught(both was almost tha same) Punchez-ON slaught( had more an had better) Structure-Tie v/onslaught vote on dis battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138170 |
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07-29-04, 02:28 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: DB8D 5EE9
Supreior Took This He Had A Better Drop And Flow Was Sick...Slaught You Said Supreior In just About everyline We Know His Name...And You Didnt Have Any Good personals At All Really Your Punches Really Didnt Connect....
Open..Superior Closer..Superior Punches..Superior.. Perosnals..Superior..Bugs Life LMAO Winner-Superior
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07-29-04, 02:40 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 07C8 9C8D
DICKRHYER!!!!! LOL uppin 1 on this shit
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07-29-04, 02:43 PM
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"Click Clack"
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IP: 6247 B101
^^WTF? stop trying to sway....big wolfy there prob is though
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07-29-04, 03:08 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 456D 2E0B
superior takes this due to the fact that his punches hit hard and they stuck although you could reword your shit a little bit better so they stick more....LOS you need a little bit of elevation with your punches and rewording them
Open..Superior Closer..Superior Punches..Superior.. Perosnals..Superior..Bugs Life LMAO Winner-Superior |
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07-29-04, 04:22 PM
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"Click Clack"
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IP: 106D 7BEF
uppin this ish
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07-29-04, 04:35 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
Lyrical- Came Decent Punches Connected, Structure Was Good, And Flow Was On Point, Wordplay Was Good...
Revoke- Damn That Phone Line Was Sick Man, Structure Was Good, Flow Was Decent Punches- Revoke Flow- Revoke Wordplay- Lyrical Multis- Niether Metaphors- Tie Structure- Lyrical Originality- Revoke Final Vote- Revoke Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137714
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07-29-04, 09:49 PM
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"Click Clack"
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IP: 6247 B101
thanks for the votes so for....uppin for some honest votes
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