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DisasterMaster 0 0%
Plutonium 5 100.00%
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Old 07-14-04, 08:51 PM   #1
Plutonium
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From: New Zealand
Plutonium VS DisasterMaster

IP: 7189 3E18

u know the rules

verse due in half an hour

good luck!
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Old 07-14-04, 08:52 PM   #2
Plutonium
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remember to check in so i know ur spitting........
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Old 07-14-04, 08:53 PM   #3
shabba ranks
Flyweight
 
From: The bottom of the bottoms
IP: 3240 794D

check.....
 
Old 07-14-04, 09:07 PM   #4
shabba ranks
Flyweight
 
From: The bottom of the bottoms
IP: 3240 794D

let me slay this man right quick...

if you think this cat is good you must be mistaken
called plutonium cuz platinum was already taken
if they scored this 1-10 u suck so bad ur un-rateable
ur rhymes r so old, they lost hair, n are un-fade-able
Rhymes plain wouldn’t be flashy…. even u neon-kit it
Rap and sex same for ya…. 1 mins just beyond-limit
crack baby, we know your shit is done
straight from the lab but still dunno were you from
lets stop the polls cuz homies verse has bad reviews
they say 'straight from the lab' they mean the 'test tubes'

done
 
Old 07-14-04, 09:12 PM   #5
Plutonium
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here's my ten............

the disasters you make are so wack it makes you lose faster//
you're in a rapbattle kid, you've found the wrong thing to master//
i'ma finish you faster than the caller ID showing up on ur telephone//
what can you punch me with, draught, tsunami, or maybe a cyclone!??//
kid this shit is final, i'ma make your fate worse than fatal//
cause any nuclear explosion are far worse then a dribble from volcanoes//
bitch you're wasting your time where you could've been practising//
cause no matter how close you punch you'd still be reported missing//
fuck, your punches keep missing, and i've been through Lost and Found//
not hard to find, cause most of ur posts are in the Lyricist Lounge//
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Old 07-14-04, 09:14 PM   #6
Plutonium
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uppin for votes..................

good battle here
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Old 07-14-04, 10:57 PM   #7
shabba ranks
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From: The bottom of the bottoms
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we need votes
 
Old 07-14-04, 11:23 PM   #8
mC RIOT
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my vote goes to Plutonium cuz his shit was dope throughout. he had some good punches and some of da wordplay was dope.
da other cat's shit was too basic and i wasnt feelin his structure at all

vote: Plutonium
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Old 07-14-04, 11:25 PM   #9
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return da favor

drop an honest one on da battles below
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Old 07-15-04, 11:54 AM   #10
shabba ranks
Flyweight
 
From: The bottom of the bottoms
IP: E3CA 7CA2

uppin for votes
 
Old 07-15-04, 12:09 PM   #11
Recluse
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From: Boggie Down Bronx
IP: 4289 77F4

break down

opener:P
punches:both
flow:P
structure:P
wordplay:none
vocab:P
personals:both
closer
overalllutonium
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Old 07-23-04, 09:31 PM   #12
Plutonium
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uppin for more votes..................................
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Old 07-23-04, 10:29 PM   #13
fluidmoon
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ok:
ima have to give this to plutonium, ya verse was good, ya had good flow, structure, creative punches and an overall better verse than disaster..more creative punches.
disaster:ya had a decent verse, but not strong enough for the win here, ya flow and structure were good tho, just not hard or creative enough......
VOTElutonium
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Old 07-28-04, 05:04 AM   #14
Plutonium
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uppin for more votes aight........................
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Old 07-29-04, 04:18 PM   #15
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aight this was a good close battle but it came down 2 the more complex verse
and the harder punches

Disaster you had a good verse you had good wordplay and ya punches could of hit
alot harder but you had a good flow alltogether ya structure was a lil fucked up
but you can fix that you had nice vocab and it was a good drop

Plu you had a nice drop to good wordplay good complexity and ya punches
hit harder than ya comp's and overall you had better structure and better
wordplay which made ya flow run alot more smoother and made it look alot
better and it was easier to read and ya had better vocab overall you had
the better drop

my vote~~~~~~~~~~pLUtonium~~~~~~~~~~
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