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Apotheosis

I’ll rip u a new hole..when I take control w/ rhymes..
So u can shit ur pants..& ride Spul’s dick at the same time.
ok..
I aint got beef w/ fags..judgin aint my place..
But be honest..u don’t want the title..u want my waist.
lol...aight
Weak rhymes cant compete..they are old like senior citizens..
Coz ur tryin 2 go for gold..but come up bronze like Domicans.
LOOOL...nice
No mean bone in ur body..so I’ll easily win this bout..
But ill change that^..when I put my fist thru ur mouth.
nice bar
Don’t be scared by the way..i threaten 2 break ya nose..
Coz after we can shake on it..like ur poor skilled audios.
lool good personal not feelin the punch
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/jpollmusic.htm
I’ma take a page out ya book..then wipe my ass w/ it dood,
Coz u only be swinging hard..when ur bitchin w/ your mood.
hmm..nah
Leave u w/ less internals..than your wack rhyme scheme,
& it must suck how ur like this…a weak link to ur team.
lool good
Unlike lookin at ur face..this wont be an upset,
Coz J/P comes after wit..like sayin Jus Playin on the net.
cool...aight
Under dogs ARE dicks..so lets abide by the predictions,
U got wak wrote all over u………………………………………..
…………..…& ya rhymes practically explain ur description.
alright...
I can tell ur prolly ugly..spotty & bucked tooth like a beaver,
Coz u got a face a mother wud love………………………………..
…………………………………………†¦to make adoption feel easier.
Lmao...lol nice closer

nice witty verse some nice punches good drop had me laughing at times too

8.5/10


JPoll

I have visions of wackness, and it's apo he's like a cancer...
The only real personals he writes are the ads that he answers...
ok...
I'll admit he writes with wit, well not the 10th time it's written...
Wrote it 3 years ago, thinks we'll never know but it ain't hidden...
hmm...1st line could of been better
Apo's verses replicate his hair, just too lazy to run at my range...
He has cred that's strange,
....when it took him three days to realize the site had a name change...
LOOL...good
Cries about losing his girls, just noise and lies i know his wack ploys...
He found rb by accident looking up his real passion of rapping lil boys..
did you mean rape or rap? hmm ok bar
The kids lies are leakin, he's never speaking again with his pretence...
Cause apo got caught with Triple N and The Q in a gay sex sequence..
this is ok...
That ain't a gay joke, yup note that i'm just giving yall non fiction...
He's even horny for e-ass, that gives a whole new meaning for his diction...
if this was a play on his old name..good
This is assault and battery, Like an allergy you didn't wanna battle me...
He tried to sign out, like I was fatning and he couldn't stand another calorie..
ok..
Apotheosis thinks he's over par, that he'll go far and he's a chat rap star...
Doesn't prove nothing, except ya need another person to have a decent bar...
lool...nice
Apo tends to rhyme bout violence, while I'm leaving apos fat body headless...
He's steady gettin breathless?as I assault and verbally take his necklace...
hmmm..not feelin it bro
Apo even comes clean at times, that he's sick of being wack but it's given...
You got less chance of changing,
.................................then polifick actually being signed to no limits...
did he not get signed? dont know I think he did...nice bar

good verse you had alot of personals butsome didnt hit hard
..some of your bars
were good others were ok...good battle props to both no hate

8.2/10

v/apo

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O Know, He's Back!

I’ll rip u a new hole..when I take control w/ rhymes..
So u can shit ur pants..& ride Spul’s dick at the same time.
-almost
I aint got beef w/ fags..judgin aint my place..
But be honest..u don’t want the title..u want my waist.
-almost
Weak rhymes cant compete..they are old like senior citizens..
Coz ur tryin 2 go for gold..but come up bronze like Domicans.
-nah
No mean bone in ur body..so I’ll easily win this bout..
But ill change that^..when I put my fist thru ur mouth.
-meh
Don’t be scared by the way..i threaten 2 break ya nose..
Coz after we can shake on it..like ur poor skilled audios.
-lol.. nice
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/jpollmusic.htm
I’ma take a page out ya book..then wipe my ass w/ it dood,
Coz u only be swinging hard..when ur bitchin w/ your mood.
-nah
Leave u w/ less internals..than your wack rhyme scheme,
& it must suck how ur like this…a weak link to ur team.
-nah
Unlike lookin at ur face..this wont be an upset,
Coz J/P comes after wit..like sayin Jus Playin on the net.
-almost
Under dogs ARE dicks..so lets abide by the predictions,
U got wak wrote all over u………………………………………..
…………..…& ya rhymes practically explain ur description.
-nah
I can tell ur prolly ugly..spotty & bucked tooth like a beaver,
Coz u got a face a mother wud love………………………………..
…………………………………………†¦to make adoption feel easier
-lol.. nice

-2 nices, 3 almost, 5 nah, 1 meh

I have visions of wackness, and it's apo he's like a cancer...
The only real personals he writes are the ads that he answers...
-almost
I'll admit he writes with wit, well not the 10th time it's written...
Wrote it 3 years ago, thinks we'll never know but it ain't hidden...
-nah
Apo's verses replicate his hair, just too lazy to run at my range...
He has cred that's strange,
....when it took him three days to realize the site had a name change...
-nah
Cries about losing his girls, just noise and lies i know his wack ploys...
He found rb by accident looking up his real passion of rapping lil boys..
-nah
The kids lies are leakin, he's never speaking again with his pretence...
Cause apo got caught with Triple N and The Q in a gay sex sequence..
-nah
That ain't a gay joke, yup note that i'm just giving yall non fiction...
He's even horny for e-ass, that gives a whole new meaning for his diction...
-nah
This is assault and battery, Like an allergy you didn't wanna battle me...
He tried to sign out, like I was fatning and he couldn't stand another calorie..
-nah
Apotheosis thinks he's over par, that he'll go far and he's a chat rap star...
Doesn't prove nothing, except ya need another person to have a decent bar...
-nah
Apo tends to rhyme bout violence, while I'm leaving apos fat body headless...
He's steady gettin breathless?as I assault and verbally take his necklace...
-nah
Apo even comes clean at times, that he's sick of being wack but it's given...
You got less chance of changing,
.................................then polifick actually being signed to no limits...
-meh

1 almost, 1 meh, 8 nah.

v) Apo

didn't really like JP's veres at all

Apo came below average but still pulled it off with 2 punches that i liked

weak championship

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p.s. please check out the links...you won't get alotta of the punches if you don't look...

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Apotheosis
I’ll rip u a new hole..when I take control w/ rhymes..
So u can shit ur pants..& ride Spul’s dick at the same time.
7/10...nice opener
I aint got beef w/ fags..judgin aint my place..
But be honest..u don’t want the title..u want my waist.
5/10..dont like it...
Weak rhymes cant compete..they are old like senior citizens..
Coz ur tryin 2 go for gold..but come up bronze like Domicans.
7/10...lmao...
No mean bone in ur body..so I’ll easily win this bout..
But ill change that^..when I put my fist thru ur mouth.
7.5/10...hard
Don’t be scared by the way..i threaten 2 break ya nose..
Coz after we can shake on it..like ur poor skilled audios.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/jpollmusic.htm
8/10...clowned
I’ma take a page out ya book..then wipe my ass w/ it dood,
Coz u only be swinging hard..when ur bitchin w/ your mood.
7/10...nice
Leave u w/ less internals..than your wack rhyme scheme,
& it must suck how ur like this…a weak link to ur team.
6/10...ehh
Unlike lookin at ur face..this wont be an upset,
Coz J/P comes after wit..like sayin Jus Playin on the net.
6/10...not really dissin him, cuz its not an insult to come after "wit"
Under dogs ARE dicks..so lets abide by the predictions,
U got wak wrote all over u………………………………………..
…………..…& ya rhymes practically explain ur description.
6.5/10...wasnt really feelin this
I can tell ur prolly ugly..spotty & bucked tooth like a beaver,
Coz u got a face a mother wud love………………………………..
…………………………………………†¦to make adoption feel easier
7/10....strong closer
overall - 6.7...had some good punches, and witty lines...good drop.

J-Poll
I have visions of wackness, and it's apo he's like a cancer...
The only real personals he writes are the ads that he answers...
7/10...fresh start
I'll admit he writes with wit, well not the 10th time it's written...
Wrote it 3 years ago, thinks we'll never know but it ain't hidden...
6/10...no punch..
Apo's verses replicate his hair, just too lazy to run at my range...
He has cred that's strange,
....when it took him three days to realize the site had a name change...
6.5/10...good, but u worded it bad....
Cries about losing his girls, just noise and lies i know his wack ploys...
He found rb by accident looking up his real passion of rapping lil boys..
5/10...i dont see anything about little boys....
The kids lies are leakin, he's never speaking again with his pretence...
Cause apo got caught with Triple N and The Q in a gay sex sequence..
7/10...lol
That ain't a gay joke, yup note that i'm just giving yall non fiction...
He's even horny for e-ass, that gives a whole new meaning for his diction...
6.5/10...ok..
This is assault and battery, Like an allergy you didn't wanna battle me...
He tried to sign out, like I was fatning and he couldn't stand another calorie..
7/10...nice...
Apotheosis thinks he's over par, that he'll go far and he's a chat rap star...
Doesn't prove nothing, except ya need another person to have a decent bar...
6/10..i dont see anything about him havin to use another persons bars
Apo tends to rhyme bout violence, while I'm leaving apos fat body headless...
He's steady gettin breathless?as I assault and verbally take his necklace...
6/10...wut does a necklace have to do wit anything?
Apo even comes clean at times, that he's sick of being wack but it's given...
You got less chance of changing,
.................................then polifick actually being signed to no limits...
7/10...lol...
overall - 6.4...u had some weak punches, and u had way too many links in that bitch...
v/apo......

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