I’m the illest rapper without the word play
Not Respected cuz these other mcs turned gay/
The first time I spoke since the Carson Battle/
The first rhyme I wrote since sparked & rattled/
The smoke is getting thick and is suffocating/
Snort coke and getting dick yeah you complicating/
Yeah the Finest in the alliance has got the virus/
The Ill Rhymers stand in defiance has rocked the wires/
We don’t get what we want, and what we want is respect/
They say the got ill rhymes, but all They Got is Incest/
Like Trigga said… I’m the reason ya’ll retire/
Step up, get crushed, by the KC’s best free styler/
Not much goin’ for me right now other then the reef/
But the game still weak right now cuz of the beef/
I’m not really comin’ all out, I just wanted to say somethin’/
Just so y’all rooks runnin’ y’all mouth know I still got it jumpin’/
The pot dynasty is in full swing ready for war/
The hot rhymers seem to be already for more/

didn't really try on this... just wanted to say a thing or two... practice...lol

But I haven't posted any open mics in so long so....

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yo dat was hot.dat was da hottest shit i read on here yet.dats fire.u da jigga of the typin game.keep it up.

thanks man

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nice metas and references...good play on words


rhyming could be more complex


otherwise...hot like kid said


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thanks for the response..

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flizzoat for response

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hey enjoyed reading this right hers so nice so let me drop this right here

Look I fear the beast so try create a atmosphere of peace
Make domes spin atone for sins make microphones bend and crease
Attacks reputations with facts and devastation then go
Back to revelation read about the coming of Christ for show
Gin got me humming nice yo, pour a cup of that hardcore
Corrupt wine it buck sometimes in a glass so sip galore
My Ebonics are thug mean like an atomic submarine
Hooked on phonics and club queens hair tonic on my mug extreme
So fly my hot dew rag bold atop of a flagpole cats salute
Stats acute like a knife blade, strife played a part in this fruit

k madrapper you dont make sense but for the pimp here he was pretty hot ight he had good metha fors ight thats good shit heres some fast shit for ya to read:

People tellin me I aint good enough/
to make it in the game but ill just stand up tall and buff/.
and tell em straight off wit my hardcore rhymes/
i will be gettin better from time to time/.
i spit into the mic on top of my comp/
and say yer done i stomped you out/.
and how about i say it with a mutha fucken (shout)/. (loud)

i wanna take my rap to the pro's/
so i can meet some pretty nice hoe's/.
so im gonna be gettin better ill be pushin my self/
to do my best ill take my rap to the top/
and be number one on all the charts and never stop/.
ill be one of the best not sayin, i am the best yet/
but i bet im gonna be set/
so ill be putin down all the people that said i couldent do it with a threat/


"Tha Fasta Noun"

Fuckin' a Chalk... I fuckin' beat that hoar all the fuckin' day... The only person In KC to beat me more than 50% of the time is Skatterman.

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that was good u no complexity could use work ive never seen u write liek this usually u write stretched and complex pretty good drop 7/10

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