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08-05-04, 12:16 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Fire!!!!!
IP: 3E4C EA5E
Spit verbal grenades
lyrical bullets sprayed cowards get buried in graves nobody can fuck wit AK It aint nothin for me to murder you the mack'll make ya head a drop-top convertible while you lyin horizontal, i'm standin vertical the illest to ever spit, the flow is burnin you If you get hit from the glocks when they blast you wont be able to breathe, you need a fuckin oxygen mask these bitches just drop and they gasp You'll get put in plastic, but i ain't talkin no zip-lockin bag |
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08-06-04, 09:01 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 5EF6 96BE
Post some feedback
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08-06-04, 12:27 PM | #3 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: F694 DF56
I appreciate stuff with substance (which u did not provide) but it was hot and u had some crazy metaphors. Good job (not like u need me to tell u that. But i'm new here. I'm a 16 year old poet and I love hip hop (rap is different but I wont get into that). I just posted my first poem on here and it's called "higher" read it 4 me and tell me what u think. Thanx alot
P.S- I respect and expect honesty |
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08-06-04, 12:40 PM | #4 | ||||
Simply Dope
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IP: 28AD 5545
pretty good shit... just work on ur structure 7/10
gimme some feedback on my open shit its above urs somewhere |
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