10-16 lines...do yo thing...no crew votes and all that other bullshit ppl do...no HATE VOTES either

do yo thang playa,due in what? 30 min i guess...check in first

a you go first cause i been going first the last three battles so you go but if u don't i'll still go first

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maybe u don't know, but on the mike iam the man/half of yall nigga gas up like nitrogencan/tha boy with tha 360 waves and a fade/killin in this game, like dywane wade/yall know my goals/iam in the hood like pot holes/ fucka

whatever...yo last three battles aint got nuthin to do wit me, if u felt that way u shouldve set it up, but i'll go first, itz nuthin


checkn in....

J DOT will merk this prick and pay for his funeral/
knock him down in the secound round like he Roy Jones Jr./
i'll put u where my sig's pointin, if im disrespected/
spit words in folks ears like im highly infectious/
i dont need to hear u flow first, i'll rip u apart/
nail u up to the wall, and start playin human darts/
im cold, but i pack heat, even in winter/
i'll merk this beginner, and have my words get inside him like a splinter/
dawg...u more square then spongebob and that aint even the half of the matter/
when i pull the gun out, imma aim past yo blatter/
you could run but u cant hide, im coming wit dozens/
cried about goin first THREE times, dawg, u buggin/
this is my 7th battle and i went first everytime and thought nuthin of it/
i wanted a battle, u want beef, then imma start grubbin/
im not really a rapper, i dont even try/
i just put words together and make sure that they rhyme/
and they do, so i got skillz or it must be luck/
niggas dont care if u was 'ARREST'ed, u stupid fuk/
u could be locked up like AKONZ, 8 times, and still wont be hard/
bitch u softer than a pillow, now spit yo bars/

j-dot, your not/
a mc going against me/
iam mj, ya like a shawn bradly/
everbody i flow against i kill'em and they try/
i got nigga's on here going against me scare to reply/
my flow come harder/
my flows will shit on you like toilet water/
go against my flow, it keeps gettin steeper/
you trying a takeover, so you about to get ether/
you can't beat me line for line/
the only way u can beat me, if jesus wrote ya rhymes/
nigga u can't fuck wit my flow to sik/
ya flow is like a dry click/
witch u probably like to lick/
probably beatin off in ya momma livin room lookin at flick/
i serve ya ass like a waiter/
ya nigga is some striaght fakers/
leave your stunt like the piston did the lakers/
holla back

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maybe u don't know, but on the mike iam the man/half of yall nigga gas up like nitrogencan/tha boy with tha 360 waves and a fade/killin in this game, like dywane wade/yall know my goals/iam in the hood like pot holes/ fucka

aight...uppin for some votes ppl..................

yea vote people tell me what cha though and holla at cha boy

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maybe u don't know, but on the mike iam the man/half of yall nigga gas up like nitrogencan/tha boy with tha 360 waves and a fade/killin in this game, like dywane wade/yall know my goals/iam in the hood like pot holes/ fucka

this battle was neck n neck yall on each othas level but i thought J DOTs punches hit harder but if it was for his punches arrest would have taken him cuz he started slippin toward the end

vote-J DOT

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a my fault i didn't reply back naw they kept sayin i got merk he was good but he was'nt that good. but yea thanks for complement

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maybe u don't know, but on the mike iam the man/half of yall nigga gas up like nitrogencan/tha boy with tha 360 waves and a fade/killin in this game, like dywane wade/yall know my goals/iam in the hood like pot holes/ fucka

This was a decent Battle... I think JDot Had more complexity to his rhymes- arrest was decent but ya rhymes were a little choppy and basic in a few spots...Both of you work a little on structure and keep on battling and elevate but JDot takes this one... e-z-- yo this cat hasn't dropped yet but if yall can give this a click later on and drop a vote it'd be appreciated......200 posts to vote... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...090#post1364090

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thanx peoples...uppn, two more for another K.O., lets go wit some honest votes people, and some real votes (dont want em dq'ed when im bout to win)...good lookn people

not a bad battle
Arrest you were way too simple with ya lyrics and punches soft decent but
work on more vocab.. J u came harder with the vocab nice flow but not much personals and too much gun talk
but flow j
struct Arrest
metas j
Vocab j
overall j

no hate at all arrest you ok u just need practice like everyone
j, good battle
i got acouple going drop an honest vote

aiyo peoples...uppin this shit, its been up forr i dont kno how long, and still slept on