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Check in by: 08-28-04 at 02:47 PM

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upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 02:50 PM.

less open dis battle by sayin u dont kno how ta connect wit people/
well nex time i come to ya crib imma connect wit ya through the peep hole/
and if it dont touch ya ppl catch y0o ass prayin at a steeple/
jus my prescense is lethal, like methane gas/
i come unprotected cuz niggas is scared of my ass/
im untouchable like da ghost from christmas past/(hah)

i should b put in a mental ward cuz im jus that damn crazy/
these niggas kno im on a higher level s0o yo ass should start ta praise me/

put s0o many holes in ya chest ya start ta look like spongebob/
ya blood will rise start ta make ya lungs throb/

cmon now ya game is weaka than a muscle depleted criple/
my gun metal makes ya squint like y0o ass was eatin a pickle/

u dumb shit get ya hand off ya dick/
the only pussy u eva recieved was from ya kitty cat kid/

now im out but b 4 i go im gunna tell ya sumthin u should kno/
dont eva think u gunna win a battle thas like sayin the usa basketball team gunna win gold///////

~peace~

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 04:31 PM.

eho yo son..u not on my level

ima be "upfront" wit this nigga, he thought he could spit
couldnt bet nobody so he bought him a win
watch out when them things run out the tech
it'll Cool J ya dome, ya "head sprung" out ya neck
I spit real loud, that u could say I blow
call dis number 1-800-save my flow
everyday i show, Mc's who wan test me
that they get CRUNCHED like i hung wit nestle
lets see, if u wanna go thats fine
how u gon b a "newb" spittin old ass rhymes
i got u all shook like i hold dat nine
if fu was "upfront" then its throwback time
u must b confused wit all ya wrong way raps
cuz diss nigga mo "pussey" than the Broadway Cats
my punches smack hard while u hurtin for hits
u a RAP waiter, cuz u workin for "tips"
dog, ima laugh, cuz ya raps all jokes
when spit, like Daffy Duck, tha-tha-thats all folks
string "hangs" mc's they commit lyrical suicide
than i commit mass murdas, as if ya whole crew had died
dont bite my rhymes, its a sin to rob me
i rap underage but they dont begin to card me
haa, u a winner?..hardly
cuz i seen better punchlines at dinner parties HAAAAA

and thas what we call a wrap

uppin for votes holla at me n i'll return the favor wit a honest opinion

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

uppin for votes holla at me n i'll return the favor wit a honest opinion

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

Voted For: String9487

both were kinda wack
String: he had wack shit but he get the vote cos he wasnt as wack and he hasd some ok lines and heis flow and structure was iight also he had some weak personals and punches
Upfront: your was wack and you need imporving you didnt have any goodf lines

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Voted For: String9487

ima vote for upfront his lines were a lil harder his vocab was way better and he basically took this one

string u iight jus get betta vocab i mean raps and cats cmon now
flow=upfront
punches=string
vocab=upfront
beginnin and end=upfront

vote=upfront

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[I]i voted 4 upfront wtf is that[/I i didnt vote for string sum 1 gotta fix dat shit

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y0o mannn he voted fa me and u gave string da vote wuts that bout mayne

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Voted For: String9487

WELL GOD DAMN THIS WAS A LAND SLIDE MY VOTE GOES TO STRING HE HEAD BETTER PUNCHES BETTER STRUCTURE BETTER FLOW BETTER EVERYTHING, UPFRONT YOUR VERSE WAS BLAND TOO PLAIN PUNCHES WERE ELEMENTARY NEXT TIME DIG DEEPER HOMIE

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Voted For: String9487

no good punches no good disses either upfront a whole verse of corny self glorification no hate but that loses battles save that for open mic ok flow ok vocab a 3/10
string opener aint hit head sprung good punch there 1-800 lmao nestle bar played throwback time good personal cats good diss too much good shit to name good structure and flow good ender just work on your openeres this had madd nice dissses and punches good ass verse8/10

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