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MC Wrapper 0 0%
Ruffridah187 5 100.00%
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Old 08-03-04, 11:36 PM   #1
Detrimental
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MC Wrapper vs Ruffridah187

IP: FE02 6F02

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Check in by: 08-06-04 at 11:36 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.
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Old 08-03-04, 11:37 PM   #2
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Ruffridah187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 11:37 PM.
 
Old 08-03-04, 11:40 PM   #3
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MC Wrapper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 11:40 PM.
 
Old 08-03-04, 11:54 PM   #4
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You Wanna battle me, ha thats real funny,
I will take you down like Elmer Fred's Bunny,
My Rhymes will blow you away,
You will spit one verse and not know what to say,
I'm hott home boy, ill get you twisted,
Im the best in the book but i remain unlisted,,
your avaters a trick .. it really a boy,
but you look at it and get some joy,
you dont scare me no you dont fright me,
If you dont liek that?.. Megabyte me!
Ok i read your lines like they worth on cent,
you wasting your time , your day is spent,
you think you good and all riddin ruff?..
well get ready boy , my rhymes are tough,
yeah i got the rhymes i got all that stuff
your grandma likes me shes a real clapper,
your a piece of gum .. im the wrapper,
i hold you together and keep you straight,
if i throw you away .. bitch its too late,
You wil then realize im better than you,
i never stop you from gettin chewed,
you think your better than me mistacidly,
but i will tell you this basicley,
you aint gonna beat me not now not ever ,
but you thought you had a chance... Pretty Clever!!!
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Old 08-04-04, 12:04 AM   #5
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MC Wrapper, wanna be rapper, i could shit on you harder now than if i was on the crapper
Battlin me is like runnin into a bug zapper, after that mistake you in a circle of laughter
My rhymes torture you like you were caught up in the rapture in pain cuz you were captured
You the easiest thing to me since Ruff Tuff Thug
My rhymes hit you harder than a truck with you spittin out its spark plug
MC Wrapper? What are you a little rap elf, probably 12 and aint tall enough to reach the "cookies" on the shelf
Your rhymes are hell, the funniest thing to me since Kennon and Kel
I bet DJ Melly Mel could "beat" the shit out of you, when ya blood spills it would still be blue
My rhymes will beat you senseless, don't know why your fuck with me when i'm this relentless
My rhymes leave you stupider than people runnin into fences
The stenches of your rhymes make me wanna hide in trenches
My rhymes hit you harder than you could with 3 wrenches
After this you will be like OMB wantin to gain your vengence
But shit why am i spittin shit that is rare as rubies?
Fuck it man, i'm done embarrassing this newbie
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Old 08-04-04, 12:09 AM   #6
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good battle Brad...peace
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Old 08-04-04, 12:09 AM   #7
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Old 08-04-04, 12:10 AM   #8
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Voted For: Ruffridah187

Flow: ruffrudah
Wordplay:ruffridah
Punchlines: Ruffridah
Structure:MC Wrapper
Personals: neither

Basically Ruffridah yo punches took it, you had a lot more content and i enjoyed reading your verse more.. both of you keep it up.

Can you return the favor and drop in my thread? thanx
here is
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139363
 
Old 08-04-04, 12:14 AM   #9
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Voted For: Ruffridah187

aight this gone go 2 187 for an overall better drop and harder punches wit more wordplay and better multi's
it was a nice battle but mc you came wit some soft ass punches and ya wordplay wasent on point you had an ok drop but you need 2 elevate alot and jus use better wordplay and not come wit some plain and simple punches

187 u had nice wordplay ya structure was a lil fucked but work on that and keep usein ya wordplay and vocab and u will b good
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Old 08-06-04, 12:17 AM   #10
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Voted For: Ruffridah187

Ruffridah won this battle because his flow was easier to understand. it was obvious that these two combatants had no real punches and didnt really get personal but tha vote goes to ruffrida wit betta lyrics.
return tha favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139297
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139502
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139783
i only need one vote on each of these and i win them all...
but vote fairly as i did for you...
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Old 08-08-04, 07:33 PM   #11
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From: Mackamento
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Voted For: Ruffridah187

this was by far the most simple wack battle i ever seen...both into's was wack...but ruffridah did have me laugh, not because it was better, but because it was weak...people elevate please...i did like some lines from rr187, some things stood out, but they were still simple, cant remeber where they were, but that was a punch that landed, oh yea, the last line, that was why u got it...that was coo...nice rhyme, finally, and it was on point, too bad the rest of your flow wasnt...the reason why i didnt choose wrapperm cause his style annoyed me, and it didnt even fit into his flow, it sounded like recycled raps into one when i read it...didnt make since...elevate


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