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Old 08-07-04, 04:40 PM   #1
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Hardship & Differences

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Ok this is a song I did to try and stop all racism and to make people overcome their differences...I hope you like it.

Verse 1

Check it,
I get out of my house just to see somebody drop
Then to see a poor hoodguy get shot by a wealthy cop
I walk by a school just to see 5th graders get taught to cock a glock
Just so they can survive,their walk down the block
To senators and prime ministers,this suprisingly doesnt strike a shock
All this violence makes seniors scared to go on a quiet little walk
Cause they know there'll probably be a careerless thug who spends his days trying to scare and mock
All the law inforcers promise to handle this,but all they do is talk
All this ghetto discrimination,has got to fricken stop

Chorus: x1

United States,no love all hate
It's too late a date,to change our horrible fate
We prepare to mourn,as soon as a child is born
Cause we'll all die,when we can legally by some porn
Everyday its the same,we try not to be a shame
And try hard not to dishonour,our family name

Verse 2

Welfare isn't enough so young teens start drug dealing
It's not surprising to see under 7 kids stealing
In the average ghetto home,it's women's insides you'll find on the ceiling
Victims of rape,by young people who got ignored,and who have confused feelings
Then those young kids,then go out for a drink
Influenced by commercials and rap,they no longer know what to think
The revolution soon has to erupt to save its kind
Cause if it doesnt nobody will care about what they carelessly left behind
All I hope is that someday I can make people see the light of day
So if you write or rap,dont do it for the pay
Do it for expressing yourself,in the ways that you want
It really isnt worth it,to discriminate and tautn
We're all alike,in different matters
And all equivalent,on the ranking ladder
So if you plan to start beef,dont,cause the person youre insulting might be your brother,

Chorus x1

Verse 3

Some people have different accents,but its still the same language
Alot of people have different problems,but its still the same anguish
It all just builds up and waits for the time to get out
Sometimes at the worst moment,and everyone hears you
shout
And if you're of color,its straight to jail without a hearing
Exceptions if youre famous but thats fading
Crime rates are soaring with no stopping
It's a miracle if you get outta yo house without hearing some popping
Nowadays theres so many racists and haters,nazis and sexists
Soon those people will spread theur disease and the whole world will be fachist
So if you get the chance,travel to other places
And wait until the end of your trip to judge the faces
So what if they eat differently or have a different culture?
Have different pasts and different sculptures
But deep within they are quite the same
Even if they have 40 characters in their name
So next time you discriminate,or even make a name call
Just remember,were not so different after all....

Chorus x2

I dedicate this to everyone stuck in the hood with little or no hope left,I hope one day you'll achieve your dreams.
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Old 08-07-04, 06:02 PM   #2
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nice drop avanish....i was really feeling the concept. nice flow n wordplay. 8.5/10. peep my open mics too. peace
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Old 08-08-04, 02:41 PM   #3
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ok thx for the support dawg....ill put sum feedback on your opens too.
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Old 08-08-04, 05:54 PM   #4
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