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View Poll Results: $LXDiesel vs ...God...
$LXDiesel 1 16.67%
...God... 5 83.33%
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Old 08-12-04, 02:46 AM   #1
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$LXDiesel vs ...God...

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Old 08-12-04, 02:47 AM   #2
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...God... has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 02:47 AM.
 
Old 08-12-04, 02:53 AM   #3
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Old 08-12-04, 02:54 AM   #4
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this is that shit that i posted whe n ya didint so here it is again

if god saw you fuckin impostin him
hed beat you down wit a prostatic limb
mother fucka u aint god u just WANNA Feel powerful
i ve got enough lyric clips to make up a mouth full
yo dont onw shit and sure aint ownin me
when ya thought for that ya mustve been high on the twenty keys
G.O.D., Good for nothing Overdozed Punk ass bitch
Shhhhh God settle down now, or ya gonna get stiched
 
Old 08-12-04, 02:57 AM   #5
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shit fuck i must can count missed to fuckin lines here they are

when ya hear dat im comin nigga just knock your self out
cuz ya dont want ME to hurt you, nigga im out
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Old 08-12-04, 02:59 AM   #6
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Dreamin' of bein' Egyptian, I'll cow tip ya' horses for fun..
And, stick jabs to ya' jaw like chewin' gum..
On beats ..god.. trifle double barrel rifle locked like "B.I.G, who shot ya?"...
"Fukin wit me" you couldn't have a "Shot" if you had "Ses" with a glass of "Vodka"....
shit .god. is obviously tha "dopest in tha net" like "Drug Consumin Goalies ...
imma "abuse these kids" like "michael jackson"...u fake Thugs Amusin God~see
this dud is used to get "Booz" like Fools with alchol Abuse....
he cudn't reach the "high top" if he wore old school Shoes...
this Faggot was Askin to get his Ass Kicked..
so imma be "Crackin" his head like a Coke Addict....

quick and weak verse
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Old 08-12-04, 03:59 AM   #7
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uppin for some votes on this ....... drop a link if you want
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Old 08-12-04, 10:46 AM   #8
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god i don't like the "" plus you made the text small it was prewritten and wack. i say prewritten cause no personals also never say this: quick and weak verse

diesel had the vocab on lock. a fuck up flow though and mad personals and punch
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Old 08-12-04, 01:00 PM   #9
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Aight weak battle...
Diesel- your verse pretty much sucked...i didnt like it really...your punches werent good either..they just didnt hit hard...and some dem didnt even connected...your structure was okay...but overall manye elevate...

...God...- your verse wasnt good either but it was good enough to win this battle...your punches were decent some hit nice...your structure was okay too...overall you got this one sided battle for better verse and better punches...

v/...God...
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Old 08-12-04, 01:25 PM   #10
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...God...-Your verse was alright... Not really anything special to and but your punches hit harder then diesel's did... I felt that your verse was strong by Structure but just barly and your flow was better also.....but you could also work on that structure of yours aswell cause it was a little off


LXDiesel....your verse wasnt really that good i wasnt really feeling it cuse you punches to me was kinda weak and your structure was off aswell.....only thing you really had going for you was your flow but that was stil a lil off.....ELEVATE
 
Old 08-12-04, 01:33 PM   #11
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This was feedback posted for $LXDiesel

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Nice battle
Sorry I cant vote yet but could u vote on dis
so whe I can vote Ill vote on urs


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137643
 
Old 08-12-04, 01:59 PM   #12
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God takes this easily... He came aight but Slx was just weak...
God your opener was wack, i dint understand it, but it picked up a little with the vodka line... The goalie line was self glorification, but it was a nice line and the high top line was good, but your closer was weak...SLX i wasn't feelin ya verse, and in your second line u bit a Luda line..."i'll beat u down wit a prostetic limb"...Ya verse was just too simple and your lines were played... God gets my vote with harder hittin punches and better personals
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Old 08-12-04, 02:32 PM   #13
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heres the verdict:
GOD~your verse was good, you had nice wordplay,multies, flow and i can tell you know what your doing,with your use of rhymes in your multies, i liked your opening line and your closer as well,you just came a lot harder than your opponent nice job........1
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