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08-11-04, 04:45 AM | #1 | |
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MagiC vs Mad Dog
IP: 07E0 A9F2
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topic-Hold up @ a bank We did agree this 2 days ago Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 08-14-04 at 04:45 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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08-11-04, 04:46 AM | #2 | |
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Mad Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 04:46 AM.
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08-11-04, 04:47 AM | #3 | |
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IP: CCAE A7E8
(Verse)
One day standing in que waiting to cash my cheque, Suspicious goings on...i could feel heavy breaths, Three guys at the front, 2 beside & 1 behind me, Pull out A.K's and shout...GIMMIE ALL THE MONEY, 3 shots 2 guards drop 1 baby in his pushchair crying, 1 said SHUT THAT BABY UP OR EVERY1 IS DYING, All the comotion and then finally a silence... ...u could hear a pin drop, An old guy next to me so scared... ...his pacemaker nearly stopped, Next the men were going round wit a bag... ...like a charity collection, They came up to me and said... ...C'MON GIVE US UR POSSESIONS, I gave him the cheque i was meant to deposit, He laughed...go the cashier bank it...and withdraw it, 2 took 2 women in the back...these were sum sick fucks, Fortunately for me...i always keep shit tucked, As i got to the cashier...i looked in his eye, He saw my piece...and shouted THE PIGS IN THE SKY, 2 looked round distracted but jus for a sec, Enough time for me to unload and seal their deaths, Took 1 more out and ran behind a pillar, The last man in the room grabbed a girl and said... ...U DON'T COME OUT I'LL KILL HER, Spun round shot 1 and hit her shoulder, Lucky 4 me it pierced him i could tell he was gone... ...his face was gettin colder, Went to the next room to settle the other 2, I could hear the womens screams... ...these sick fucks had to die soon, Burst in the room, and shot...they deserved 2 be dead The women thanked me and i said... ......it's cool but get urselves checked, Stepped out and all i got was loadsa thanks, Po burst in saw the gun in my hand and shot ME down... ...they thought I was trying to rob the bank, Damn... |
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08-11-04, 07:20 AM | #4 | |
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MagiC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 07:20 AM.
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08-11-04, 06:30 PM | #5 | |
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IP: CCAE A7E8
.:Topical:.
The Bank Job <Splash> Heats racing needed to wash my face, trying to wash my sins away I feel cold yet my body is clammy, Can’t believe what I done today Had a glance in the mirror, making sure the water droplets hide my tears Before all this happened I was heartless, robbing liquor stores for dears ~Turning the clock back 3 hours~ (Dress in Black, Hooded, Part of my face showing) Paranoid of the surroundings,, someone’s behind me, false alarm its my own eco Arrived at the derelict warehouse, I feel eyes watching me blended in by the deco <Drip Drip Drip> ~Waters leaking a broken gutter on the roof, rains trickling down form the ceilings~ ~Disused equipment left here decaying coved in rust, the wallpaper arounds peeling~ approached a hole about 10 feet wide, <Whispers><Where’s your boy> I’m here <Bout time man> get the car loaded, you not staying at the savoir ~The Hold up~ ~Waiting~ <Safe opens in 3minutes> got to get in & out, take anything out that moves <prove your worth kid> then you can take you wife on a Caribbean cruse <Go Go Go!!!> armed with a Shot gun… balaclava covering my face entered the bank with intent, I will drive if we end up getting a chased vvV<Everybody get the fuck down>Vvv <Bang>gun shot to a security guards head, left he’s brains spread He reached for his gun, I had to prove I’m harder then lead I froze, couldn’t move, couldn’t believe I fired a shot with intent Before contemplating what I done all the money was colleted every cent Time to get away but they said the police had the place surrounded Rounded up all the staff can’t believe the police had us grounded I need to use the toilet ~This is where the story began~ Prayed to go to forgive me for my sin’s, I will make this right I will go out there and solve our plight, but it might start a fight Left the toilet, into the lobby, the boys had disappeared Fuck they left me this was planed, this is what I feared Look out the window the place was really surrounded <Bang> Shot between my eyes,now I’m left blooded Can feel my self moving, But I dont have any feelings Time for me to go, followin a light in that was beaming |
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08-11-04, 06:35 PM | #6 | |
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Sorry had to drop it again,,...
.:Topical:. The Bank Job <Splash> Heats racing needed to wash my face, trying to wash my sins away I feel cold yet my body is clammy, Can’t believe what I done today Had a glance in the mirror, making sure the water droplets hide my tears Before all this happened I was heartless, robbing liquor stores for dears ~Turning the clock back 3 hours~ (Dress in Black, Hooded, Part of my face showing) Paranoid of the surroundings,, someone’s behind me, false alarm its my own eco Arrived at the derelict warehouse, I feel eyes watching me blended in by the deco <Drip Drip Drip> ~Waters leaking a broken gutter on the roof, rains trickling down form the ceilings~ ~Disused equipment left here decaying coved in rust, the wallpaper arounds peeling~ approached a hole about 10 feet wide, <Whispers><Where’s your boy> I’m here <Bout time man> get the car loaded, you not staying at the savoir ~The Hold up~ ~Waiting~ <Safe opens in 3minutes> got to get in & out, take anything out that moves <prove your worth kid> then you can take you wife on a Caribbean cruse <Go Go Go!!!> armed with a Shot gun… balaclava covering my face entered the bank with intent, I will drive if we end up getting a chased vvV<Everybody get the fuck down>Vvv <Bang>gun shot to a security guards head, left he’s brains spread He reached for his gun, I had to prove I’m harder then lead I froze, couldn’t move, couldn’t believe I fired a shot with intent Before contemplating what I done all the money was colleted every cent Time to get away but they said the police had the place surrounded Rounded up all the staff can’t believe the police had us grounded I need to use the toilet ~This is where the story began~ Prayed to go to forgive me for my sin’s, I will make this right I will go out there and solve our plight, but it might start a fight Left the toilet, into the lobby, the boys had disappeared Fuck they left me this shit was planed, Look out the window the place was really surrounded <Bang> Shot between my eyes,now I’m left depleted
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08-11-04, 06:38 PM | #7 | |
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IP: CCAE A7E8
It keeps missing out buts of my verse WTF,,..
.:Topical:. The Bank Job <Splash> Heats racing needed to wash my face, trying to wash my sins away I feel cold yet my body is clammy, Can’t believe what I done today Had a glance in the mirror, making sure the water droplets hide my tears Before all this happened I was heartless, robbing liquor stores for dears ~Turning the clock back 3 hours~ (Dress in Black, Hooded, Part of my face showing) Paranoid of the surroundings,, someone’s behind me, false alarm its my own eco Arrived at the derelict warehouse, I feel eyes watching me blended in by the deco <Drip Drip Drip> ~Waters leaking a broken gutter on the roof, rains trickling down form the ceilings~ ~Disused equipment left here decaying coved in rust, the wallpaper arounds peeling~ approached a hole about 10 feet wide, <Whispers><Where’s your boy> I’m here <Bout time man> get the car loaded, you not staying at the savoir ~The Hold up~ ~Waiting~ <Safe opens in 3minutes> got to get in & out, take anything out that moves <prove your worth kid> then you can take you wife on a Caribbean cruse <Go Go Go!!!> armed with a Shot gun… balaclava covering my face entered the bank with intent, I will drive if we end up getting a chased vvV<Everybody get the fuck down>Vvv <Bang>gun shot to a security guards head, left he’s brains spread He reached for his gun, I had to prove I’m harder then lead I froze, couldn’t move, couldn’t believe I fired a shot with intent Before contemplating what I done all the money was colleted every cent Time to get away but they said the police had the place surrounded Rounded up all the staff can’t believe the police had us grounded I need to use the toilet ~This is where the story began~ Prayed to go to forgive me for my sin’s, I will make this right I will go out there and solve our plight, but it might start a fight Left the toilet, into the lobby, the boys had disappeared Fuck they left me this shit was planed, Look out the window the place was really surrounded <Bang> Shot between my eyes,now I’m left depleted
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08-12-04, 04:23 AM | #8 | |||
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes
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08-12-04, 08:05 AM | #9 | ||||
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IP: CCAE A7E8
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08-12-04, 04:37 PM | #10 | |
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Up~ing this please,,,
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08-13-04, 03:57 AM | #11 | |||
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IP: CCAE A7E8
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08-16-04, 04:43 AM | #12 | |||
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IP: CCAE A7E8
uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes
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08-16-04, 04:56 AM | #13 | |
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
Voted For: MagiC
yo i think mad dog took this cause i felt his imaginary more he really brought me in that verse his structure was ok it was betta then magic's flow was aight vocab was so so not really alot complexity none overall i liked this betta then magics versemagic your verse was good to but i felt that u didnt have tha imaginary mad dog had your structure was a lil off flow was soso vocab really nonetheir for my vote goes to mad dog |
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08-16-04, 10:14 AM | #14 | |||
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IP: CCAE A7E8
/\ LOL voted for me but posted in magics oh well i'll get it sorted lol
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08-17-04, 04:57 AM | #15 | |||
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uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes
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