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When I hear that song...
When I see your picture... When I sleep with my eyes shut tight... When I hear your name... When I get reminded of one of our inside jokes... When I think of the year behind... When I see the gift that wasn't given... I let my feelings for you be strong... I feel like expressing my love through literature... I wish that you were with me that night... I feel everything inside become pain... I try to say what I want, but it comes out in small chokes... I feel your prescence seep in to my mind... I feel my heart and body whole stiffen... But, that was then, this is now. And in this now, We both love eachother. And now I can show my feelings again wholy and unhidden. My gf and I, the one that I wrote my other poems ("1 Month Afterward" and i forget the other name) about, both know we miss/still love eachother...But we're waiting for school to start again to start officially start going out again....So right now we're kind of unofficial bf and gf lol....But yea.I like this poem... So feedback please. Will return favor. Thanks alot!
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