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View Poll Results: Boomer Vs MC RaBbIt
MC RaBbIt 5 62.50%
Boomer 3 37.50%
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 08-13-04, 08:01 AM   #1
Boomer
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Boomer vs MC RaBbIt

IP: 91BE E952

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Old 08-13-04, 08:02 AM   #2
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Boomer has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 08:02 AM.
 
Old 08-13-04, 08:12 AM   #3
Boomer
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MC RaBbit sound like a faggit so' im gonna stab it//
Dont bother postin ur verse coz itz gonna get ripped and buried in a hearse//
Dis battlez da start of ur unlucky curse//
Get used 2 ur losin streak coz dis ur first//
Cut ur blood supply from tha source-Think i cant do that course!//Spittin ur wack linez it against my lawz//Pimpin on sixes and fourz//
Rhymez cuttin in2 u like i was hellraiser//lyrikal boltz gonna sting like u hit wid a tazer//
So dont challenge me pussy-or u gonna end up baffled sittin on ur tushie
 
Old 08-13-04, 08:17 AM   #4
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MC RaBbIt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 08:17 AM.
 
Old 08-13-04, 08:27 AM   #5
Reflect
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From: England
IP: 965F B19F

another wannabe emcee, shitty little newb called boomer,
i'm gonna punch him so hard it'll leave him with a brain tumor,
this guy can't handle hits, that shows he's not a real emcee,
coz when mine connects, it'll leave him mashed up in the debris,
don't ever try to do audio, coz that'll leave em even less impressed,
coz when you rap, you sound like you are fukin possessed,
this verse will be enough to KO you, coz your shit's not very desired,
you're lyrics are crap, you'll never win, a lot of elevating is required.
 
Old 08-13-04, 08:29 AM   #6
Reflect
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From: England
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good luck. uppin for votes
 
Old 08-13-04, 08:32 AM   #7
Boomer
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uppin 4 votez plz
 
Old 08-13-04, 08:43 AM   #8
Definate Fully
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This was feedback posted for MC RaBbIt

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Dayum!!!!! Nyce Shit Mc Rabbit Especially Tha Closer That Was Tight
 
Old 08-13-04, 11:25 AM   #9
Wite Warrior
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From: in yo mummas house
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Voted For: Boomer

Vote:Boomer
Boomerz rhymez were tite so woz urz rabbit but de end bit made me laff..... Boomerz structure was good but dose // aint workin fo it
Vote:Boomer
 
Old 08-13-04, 11:55 AM   #10
Recluse
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From: Boggie Down Bronx
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Voted For: MC RaBbIt

you both suck dick.....i just picked a box to write in...damn elevate
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Old 08-13-04, 12:01 PM   #11
Ill-Grammatix
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From: Flatbush, Brooklyn
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Voted For: Boomer

mc rabbit had better structure... that's about it
boomer had better (punches?)/disses... that's about it

both need to elevate in vocab, metas, multi's,wordplay, structure,punches and personals... this was a very weak battle but hey... ya gotta start somewhere.
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Old 08-13-04, 12:04 PM   #12
EmerginMc07
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From: Chi Town
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Voted For: MC RaBbIt

yo dis battle was good as fuck, i mean Mc cae out strong man he ws redy and equiped wit punhces and evrythin, Boommer u had sum punches but they werent as hard as Mc's n plus Boomer yo struc. needs a lil work, iiite so i vote for Mc Rabbit


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yo both of u return da favor no hatee
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...491625&posted=1
iite 1 love
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Old 08-13-04, 12:12 PM   #13
Boomer
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uppin ppl^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
Old 08-13-04, 12:46 PM   #14
Reflect
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From: England
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uppin for votes. keep votin please people !
 
Old 08-13-04, 01:46 PM   #15
Demon Pyrokronix
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IP: 5ABF 5914

Wow, this is a hell of a lot better than your other verses rabbit. The only thing with it that is really noticible is your switching between 3rd and 1st person. Try and keep it in 1 at all times.
"this guy can't handle hits, that shows he's not a real emcee,
coz when mine connects, it'll leave him mashed up in the debris,"
Your best line by far.
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