TOPICAL BATTLE

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topic: You think you are god

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Check in by: 08-16-04 at 07:20 AM

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One-Man-Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 07:33 AM.

Boomer has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 07:47 AM.

Im a mutha fukin god man ,Quit rappin go bak 2 kickin yo can//
So stop now coz da shitz hit tha fan//U shudnt off started dis ull wish u fukin ran//
Im god throwin down lyrical lightnin boltz//Shockin u wid 10,000 Voltz//Itz ur own fault//YO//
I hav tha powa 2 send u 2 heaven or hell//Bitch my lyrickz r az slik as gel//
Im tha devil takin yo head as a trophy fo' sho and tell//
God droppin from heavin a muthafukin shell

One night a bright light came into my eye sight, and an angel appeared to me
came near to me, it was the epidemy of holyness, then it spoke spiritually
"This is god, the devil has swept this earth... tried to stop him but he crept through
Bless you, John, you have been chosen, I must use your body and posses you"
I had no choice the mighty voice and light was gone, it was a vision
or was it a dream? i questioned till i started to feel a bit different
Mind was no longer imprisoned... i saw what i had to do, what he wanted me for
felt more strong than before... then suddenly I was on the floor, behind me i heard the lockin of doors
wife was scared shitless cos i stared different, called me crazy
she had our son in the room, had to get to him, my heart was blazing
I had to get in, so i rammed the door n flashed the enamels
cant match the force, I was breakin the glass n smashin the panels
wheres our kid!? hes the one i gotta sacrifice, after askin twice
"I dont know, he ran away" she said...I could tell that was lies
He was hidin behind his mother, under cover of blankets..
Decievin the lord?? Goin to hell was what my lover was askin
She couldnt stop me i proceeded the 3 feet to the bed, she was shakin some more now
leavin my son un-heeded, he screamed cos my hands bleeded, from breakin the door down
my wife was opposin me some, she even groped for a gun
"whatever youre planning on doing, john, please dont to our son?!?!"
blasphemy...I didn’t care about fits from that stupid bitch
I had to save mankind… My fist was the crucifix
Punches to the lips, beating my only son till his head was split apart by my hand
The blood ran… But I had no choice, his death was merely part of the plan
That night he wasn’t my son… He was the devil, he was evil
No remorse… killed him to make shit better for my people
I could not rest until he had been forsaken and beaten at last
My wife tried to stop me, so I crowned her head with broken pieces of glass
Repeating the bash.. Repeatedly crash, she tried to tempt me that heathen
I couldn’t let her stop my plan… For she was possessed by a demon
I left her checkered n’ beaten, In her side my fist was printed
Then i heard hells choir... The sound of sirens in the distance




in case ya dont know, my names john, so i used that name ^^^

one

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uppin fo' 1st win plz

shit dat woz a long verse!!!!!

i gotta post it ... argh

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One night a bright light came into my eye sight, and an angel appeared to me
came near to me, it was the epidemy of holyness, then it spoke spiritually
"This is god, the devil has swept this earth... tried to stop him but he crept through
Bless you, John, you have been chosen, I must use your body and posses you"
I had no choice the mighty voice and light was gone, it was a vision
or was it a dream? i questioned till i started to feel a bit different
Mind was no longer imprisoned... i saw what i had to do, what he wanted me for
felt more strong than before... then suddenly I was on the floor, behind me i heard the lockin of doors
wife was scared shitless cos i stared different, called me crazy
she had our son in the room, had to get to him, my heart was blazing
I had to get in, so i rammed the door n flashed the enamels
cant match the force, I was breakin the glass n smashin the panels
wheres our kid!? hes the one i gotta sacrifice, after askin twice
"I dont know, he ran away" she said...I could tell that was lies
He was hidin behind his mother, under cover of blankets..
Decievin the lord?? Goin to hell was what my lover was askin
She couldnt stop me i proceeded the 3 feet to the bed, she was shakin some more now
leavin my son un-heeded, he screamed cos my hands bleeded, from breakin the door down
my wife was opposin me some, she even groped for a gun
"whatever youre planning on doing, john, please dont to our son?!?!"
blasphemy...I didn’t care about fits from that stupid bitch
I had to save mankind… My fist was the crucifix
Punches to the lips, beating my only son till his head was split apart by my hand
The blood ran… But I had no choice, his death was merely part of the plan
That night he wasn’t my son… He was the devil, he was evil
No remorse… killed him to make shit better for my people
I could not rest until he had been forsaken and beaten at last
My wife tried to stop me, so I crowned her head with broken pieces of glass
Repeating the bash.. Repeatedly crash, she tried to tempt me that heathen
I couldn’t let her stop my plan… For she was possessed by a demon
I left her checkered n’ beaten, In her side my fist was printed
Then i heard hells choir... The sound of sirens in the distance




in case ya dont know, my names john, so i used that name ^^^

one

man ya verse is sposeto be a topical not a diss? lol

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soz im nu

Voted For: One-Man-Band

i vote u cause urs was better and his was like more of a battle and i likes the story of urs so u get my vote

other dude fix urs up


Return an honost vote in my sig wit Charm's One-Man-Band

its aight.. not ur fault dude. your cool . Just accept callouts from people same skill as you next time... stay up

one

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uppin

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

dude to the fact the other guy had 6 lines........ band gets my vote ... in topicals bruh, you need a good amount of lines if you want it to be effective.. just some pointers..

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