9/15/04 i went to the library to check my email
i was looking for comp so i got on net to find detail/
i typed "best wordplay" on yahoo web search
if there's a top-ten list i want to get in 1st/
i'm solo...no tribe with loads of scribes explosive like when a gat burst
giving you promos through text rhymes plus the flow is tight all in a rapverse/

.......i love text battlin'.......please give me feedback.......am i hot?....am i wack?.......am i professional or amatuer...let me know 1

yo man u got an aight flow jsut work on some structure and dont like boast too much bout yourself make some tight punch lines ans like i said the structure and a lil better word play nice tho keep it up man

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dude...you got somethin goin there. i really liked that shit. just an everyday thing you turned into a damn good verse....talent i say. when you can rap about ANYTHING and make it sound good...then you gots talent. not too many people have that man. most people talk about bustin gats and crooked hats and a barrel of nines that ive heard so many times. i liked the shit man. do your dizzle...you got my support

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Now - exhibit, styles I kick with it
Pardon me, but I'm fuckin sickwiddit
--Big Daddy Kane

thanx cordless.......i see that you a real hiphop head.........cus 80% of rap aint been hiphop lately......i'm trying to bring it back to '88.......when shit was about skills and creativity........1