this is bout every lil kid out there

in every town or city or in every sub-urb
theres a dark cloud over lil kids who r dis-turbed
killin themselves with the drug n thugs
n all they really want is sum love n hugs
n settin their goal on that car with dubs
usein fake i.ds to pick up hoes in clubs
kids not gettin raised by there old man
instead look up to the criminals who have the upperhand
they're gettin taught by pimps n pushas who know the blocks
until they get caught n rat everyone to the cops
these kids don kno what really goes down
n they hear the gun sound
walkin down the street with they head lookin around
these kids don kno that they hellbound
so now kids start flippin their chips
makin sum money n ridin in there very first whip
n they hittin sum new chicks
fuckin the bitch with no rubber on the dick
n catchin aids faster than u can flick the switch
now they got a new killer thats on the streets
hiddin in the shadows so very very deep
its the perfect hitman with the best attack
n don matta if u girl or man, or white or black
juss know its as dangerous as a gat
u don noticed it like the hair on your back
besides that, they got young males killin other young males
sendin other males straight up to jail
n some kids who aint lucky n got no bail
n kids always fightin over sumthin so small
to make him self look bigger n tall
n kids come back home with broken noses or jaw
and parents shocked after wat they juss saw
seein they kid all bruised in the face
n other kids come home with gats on they waist
they juss shot someone for there first time
not to wise but cant turn back the hands of time
n now kids r flippin weed or blow
now what they need to know
is you don make real money unless your flippin O's
now listen sum mo'
to the lil kids who want the dough
its not worth it cuz i was in your shoes not to long ago



my first post wwanted to post something real i see around me, juss saw one of my lil hommies come by my house n tell me some stuff bout wats going down in his life at his age, juss keepin it real on the matter of wat i juss heard

hell yea man that shit is strait as fuck, keep it trill

anyone else feelin this? or wanna help me out with my shit?

ya the first half was kinda crap but the 2 half hit me with rhymes man good shit just work on vocab a bit honest 1 love peace