Battle Rules:

12 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r, hate.
due 1 hr after check in.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-17-04 at 07:58 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 07:58 PM.

I'm evictin'-ya-punches..best "hock ya' sPiT" for PENNIEZ at a Pawn shop
'dis Rook-ie so WEAK he couldn't "break" Knight{night} wit Bishopz on calm blockz
battlin' PICKS dropz??.Phantom U pUUssy.."douche" ya' Raw sPiTz
cause da only place U bringin' da FUNK bitch from is ya' Arm-Pitz
assault U with Speed Stickz 'til ya' fate is a (Right) Guard-ed Secret like passwords
I leave you like avy only its TUPAC spelled backwards
Smash ur bladder-quick-into-waste. Corny ass style, half-tha-shit-ends-up-paste(d).
Give u a window of opportunity and shatter-it-in-yo-face! kid
My sik shotz produce-da-(blood)Stainz.."water" ya MELON..got Fruit-fa-Brainz
but couldn't gain CLEARANCE.."infringe" upon ICE and i'll nuke-ya-frame
recoup-da-LOOT-of-lamez who clearly aren't ready to "Pay-da-Price"
in 'dis Community, i'm Godly..when we battle, U pray to- ICE
Rip ya verse-on-will, u ain't a 3rd-my-skill. PICK curse-until blood is shed, got a thirst-4-kills..
Stop ridin my jock bitch..askin bout me, I'm type "person-ill." [personal]
This hoe-disses-me.. man, theres no-escape-from-tha-kill..
Nunchucks like rotisserie when they "rotate-on-ya-grill."


TUPAC SPELLED BACKWARDS

TUPAC CAPUT

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 08:19 PM.

you aint sick, ice prick, your names says your 'flows' are 'stiff'
keep grip and dont slip as i leave you hangin on an icy cliff
this weak fuck freezes up when the beef heats up
its hoes down g's up, so lay down and lemme put my feet up
i pimp slap backwards this faggot ass rapper
toss him out the window just like a candy wrapper
you 'pick'-ed the wrong nigga to battle, your in deep trouble
the heat that im puttin to to ya will leave u as a puddle
you battle noobs for wins, you aint one of the best
your weak, ribs shatter, lungs collapse, when you pound ya chest
i didnt even merk you, this is a murder ya loser
but its cool how your sig predicted ya future (skeleton)

u had some nice wordplay but its hard for me to follow ur flow sometimes. i dont know how exactly to put it but its just a lil confusing....

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Voted For: Ice Pick

phantom them lines aint hit and your punches were weaker then jabs from a infant you need vocab and to reword alot of your disses still you had a good flow and strture so 3/10
ice good vocab your lines were kinda streched good ass wordplay and disses were slick your punches hit hard here also ending was whacked as fucked but you killed the rest of the verse 7/10

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Voted For: Ice Pick


Phantom- Good Flow, Good Structure Ok Punches

Ice Pick- Harder Punches Ok Flow, ok Wordplay, And Ok Structure

Punches- Ice Pick
Flow- Phantom
Wordplay-Ice Pick
Metaphors- Phantom
Structure- Phantom
Originality- Ice Pick

Final Vote-- Ice pick

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Yo...Ice Pick Lose The Quotations and Shit....Makes Your Verse Look Herbish....You Shouldn't Need To Point Out Ryhming Words and Punches..

But Besides That...Your Punches Were Pretty Hard and You Had Nice Wordplay.

You Mos Def Killed This Cat.

I'm Looking To Start A New Crew....So Holla At Me If Interested You Got Mad Potential and Skill.

Vote - Ice Pick

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Voted For: Ice Pick

ice pick won this....he had better word play an tha punches hit harder than phantoms

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