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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 120

Check in by: 08-23-04 at 04:48 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Sonofisis#1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 01:52 PM.

I told this bitch to take ten paces & draw, but he Ran Away
No Wonder, you ain't a gangsta, the "G" must Stand For Gay
Have any of ya'll even seen a fuckin Clown Fight?
Yo Punches are like left jabs to da ear, they dont 'Sound Right
Infinite rhymes, like long distant call plans, I'm Unlimited
U cant fit in my shoes if you were the Old Lady who Lives In It
This is just me basically tellin you that you're Not The Dopest
The way I "Close In" on him, he'll scream if he's Clostrophobic
There is no way that this bitch can ever Stand Worthy
I would slap your face, but I'd rather not get my Hands Dirty
No matter what you try to do kid, I really Am Harder
I'll Pull out the Shank and cut ya face like a Bad Barber
You're gassed up with More Wins, But I'll Damage U Severly
Yo streak will be more Short Lived than Canibus' Career G
You know that i'll win this Thing At This Pace
I jus hold G's head back & all his punches miss as he Swings At My Face








3rd bar -
there was a fairy tale about a little old lady who lived in a shoe, and i said he couldn't fit in my shoes if he was her.. http://www.porterfieldsfineart.com/...ladyinashoe.htm

G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 03:23 AM.

I defeat this bitch quick and easy...Sonofisis has lost-this,
I scuffle his brain, make him "dyslexic"..so on this battle, I put a "cross-criss".*
Carve his complexion into a sphere, and thrust his eyes out with a spear,
break his "face" like a "mirror", cuz "the punches are closer than they appear".
I "cease his remarks" swift, like a "brief discussion",
cuz like drums, he gets "beat continually", like "re-percussion".
Lyrically decapitate you…bury you in a thick-plateau,
and put “X’s on your name”, like I was playin tic-tac-toe!**
Your "punches ta me or nothin"...this "reject"ion "lacks-thee-jab",
I make him "get off the corner***"…like “givin directions in a taxi-cab”!
He rhymes "nervously"...like he looks "unsure",
but hes "full of more bullshit", than "a book on manure"!
“Sonofisis” couldn’t drop a “hot jam” if he “heated his jelly”,
You?..”#1”!?…Yeah, sure…and so is Nelly!****
Sick ass bitch, he fucks his sister’s son,
he must really be close to family…sayin his nephew is #1. (Son of sis #1)
I bash your body on the side of the street, and make your bones start sparking,
so your remains and blood can douse the curb red, for “zones for no parking”.


*Dyslexic people talk backwards. Puttin a "X" (criss-cross) or crossin this battle out quick.
**The little ‘#’ sign in his name looks like a tic-tac-toe thing.
***Ex: "[Get off at this corner] of 36th and Callan.".....givin directions...get it.
****Remember that gay song by Nelly?…Nelly - Number One.

nice^

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Good shit, Good Battle.

-Ahah. Thanks mayn you too. Mah bad for comin home late..but I told you I would spit. I was typin hella fast. I'm tired as hell.

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Voted For: G

YO NICE BATTLE FROM BOTH//

G NICE MANYE WORDPLAY PUNCHES AND PERSONALS NICE

SONOFISIS YO PUNCHES WERE GOOD AND X-WORDPLAYS MAYNE NICE THE SHOE THANG IT WAS SIK TO ME//

BUT SONO YO PUNCHES DIDNT COME HARDER DAN G'Z SO WORK LIL ON THEM PUNCHES DEN U BE IN AN GREATER LEVEL

~PEACE~

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P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

Yo Sono Or G Can Yall Vote 1 Of My Battles In Da Sig

~peace~

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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-

SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

G got this with better wordplay... Son just came too basic and had too many played lines and concepts...s also had a weak structure... lines were shorter than they shoulda been... G, the manure line was trash... never use that again....sister's son line was just as bad... but still ya had an overall beter verse

yo that was supposed to be a vote for G and not feed back... i accidentally pressed the button while i was typing... make sure he gets the vote... one

fasho, uppin

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Voted For: G

ok g takes it cuz he obviously put more thought in his punches
and personals were creative, son verse was good
straight to the point but it lacks substance
needs more creativity too
overall g takes this on his personals and punches
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...35&page=2&pp=15
ay vote on this an explain ya votes please
already 3 votes 4 me dq
shouldnot take long its a 4 line battle

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