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Old 08-12-04, 05:18 PM   #1
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Exclamation Certified Gangsta's Remix

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HOOK(jim jones)
since i made a gang of bucks,no i aint been hangin much
still slide trhough,fly coupes and the change is plush
keep the banga tucked,in case i gotta bang a bitch
cause we certified gangsta's

VERSE 1(The Game

HOOK(jim jones)

VERSE 2(Jim Jones)

HOOK(jim jones)

VERSE 3(CAM'RON)


HOOK(jim jones)

VERSE 4(Guranteed)

Now im big timin, rims shynin
ho's smilin,its all gravy
that 45. save me
put the glock on pause
come through in red
nigga,santa clause
bitches talk,hush dat
weed bitch,fuck crack
paper stackin,skull crackin
bitch smackin,playa truck
u sellin,we dont give a fuck
knock niggas silly
ho's meet big willy
wet up that all white
pull out a nine
do it all night
faggot never do it right
im guranteed to let loose
oozis mac's to,
u,im strapped to
all ova ma cock suckin
that bitch happy
dat ass screamin G-smack me
get the fuck out,dont play wit wankstas
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and watch ya back Black,we certified gangsta's
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Old 08-12-04, 07:13 PM   #2
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c'mon yall,uppin
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Old 08-12-04, 09:08 PM   #3
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tigers, lions, bears oh my. hahahaha, yeah that song iz fuckin dope. yo verse 2 it wasnt bad, tha structure wuz kinda fucked up tho, but it wuz pritty good. werd
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Old 08-12-04, 11:01 PM   #4
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thanx uppin
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Old 08-12-04, 11:24 PM   #5
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thats that shit any thing droppin from the roc tree is off the hook my nigga and that dip set bird gang/taliban is that shit.......1 fam
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Old 08-13-04, 12:50 AM   #6
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that shit was iite the structre was messed up buts its all good , peace 1luv
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Old 08-13-04, 02:27 AM   #7
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thanx uppin
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Old 08-13-04, 10:54 AM   #8
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Old 08-13-04, 11:27 AM   #9
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Old 08-13-04, 11:44 AM   #10
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ya i liked it for the most part man but you need longer lines practice that:
flow9/10
worplay4/10 used easy words to much work on that more
punches 6/10
overal7/10 good
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Old 08-13-04, 02:17 PM   #11
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Old 08-13-04, 02:41 PM   #12
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damn this was a pretty good drop
the structure was alittle of but the wordplay ..and the punchlines were decent ...
overall it was a pretty good drop so nice job ...
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Old 08-13-04, 04:06 PM   #13
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Old 08-13-04, 07:18 PM   #14
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Old 08-13-04, 07:30 PM   #15
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this was ight...u did yo thang, you had nice flows...i kinda go with they verse too, thats nice...good shit, keep it up, but yo structure, i wasnt feelin it tho...but keep elevating
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