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HOOK(jim jones)
since i made a gang of bucks,no i aint been hangin much still slide trhough,fly coupes and the change is plush keep the banga tucked,in case i gotta bang a bitch cause we certified gangsta's VERSE 1(The Game HOOK(jim jones) VERSE 2(Jim Jones) HOOK(jim jones) VERSE 3(CAM'RON) HOOK(jim jones) VERSE 4(Guranteed) Now im big timin, rims shynin ho's smilin,its all gravy that 45. save me put the glock on pause come through in red nigga,santa clause bitches talk,hush dat weed bitch,fuck crack paper stackin,skull crackin bitch smackin,playa truck u sellin,we dont give a fuck knock niggas silly ho's meet big willy wet up that all white pull out a nine do it all night faggot never do it right im guranteed to let loose oozis mac's to, u,im strapped to all ova ma cock suckin that bitch happy dat ass screamin G-smack me get the fuck out,dont play wit wankstas 's and watch ya back Black,we certified gangsta's |
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IP: 3240 794D
c'mon yall,uppin
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Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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IP: B525 44D9
tigers, lions, bears oh my. hahahaha, yeah that song iz fuckin dope. yo verse 2 it wasnt bad, tha structure wuz kinda fucked up tho, but it wuz pritty good. werd
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IP: 28AD 5545
thanx uppin
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Flyweight
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IP: B61D DAC6
thats that shit any thing droppin from the roc tree is off the hook my nigga and that dip set bird gang/taliban is that shit.......1 fam
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hey yo im known to play it low// dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio// ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes// my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised// faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1 |
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5ACB 43F6
that shit was iite the structre was messed up buts its all good , peace 1luv
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
thanx uppin
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin
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IP: 28AD 5545
Thanx Uppin
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
ya i liked it for the most part man but you need longer lines practice that:
flow9/10 worplay4/10 used easy words to much work on that more punches 6/10 overal7/10 good |
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IP: C1DA C961
thanx upppin
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Jumpin' Along
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IP: C56C 93CC
damn this was a pretty good drop
the structure was alittle of but the wordplay ..and the punchlines were decent ... overall it was a pretty good drop so nice job ...
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IP: 28AD 5545
Thanx Uppin
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IP: 3240 794D
up up uppin
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: F6AB BAF7
this was ight...u did yo thang, you had nice flows...i kinda go with they verse too, thats nice...good shit, keep it up, but yo structure, i wasnt feelin it tho...but keep elevating
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