Battle Rules:

10 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-25-04 at 09:39 PM

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ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 08:17 PM.

Royal Flush has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 08:34 PM.

Im Gonna Royally-Flush-you, urs lines gettin booed...
Your Loyality-Sucks-Fool, thats why you not in any crewz...
The only thing pro about you is the p-r-o in ur name...
Your flows blow, its like you rap from your ass instead of your brain...
Ive seen your other battles, half of your words were misspelt...
Good thing your goin back to school cause your grammar needs help...
Its B.S. when you say your using slang and your knowledge is vast...
You cant hide the facts cause we all know your really a dumbass...
Why the fuck does your location say Rap City the Basement?...
Your just a wannabe, Big Tig'* Hates you, so just face it...
See dawg i flow like a vet, but its really my first time..
Im the one and only R.F. , not Apotheosis** in disguise..

* Host of Rap City
** Heavyweight Champ of RapVerse

-stop bluffin- the only way you're a royal flush it seems-
-i you're named aftera swirlie from a queen- or a king-
-flush away all of the shity lines-rhymes resemble a mishap-
-even if you played your cards right- you still gone get craps-
-in fact- play the game- with your game-face-still face_
-_the same fate even if you-reerange your plain games-
-the system faces a better record-he didn't attempt his lines-
-you extinguished your fire-tryin to swallow your rhymes-
-sometimes some rhymes lead into a better one-
-not you- you get slept on like patients takin there medicon

ok dats my verse

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

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Voted For: Royal Flush

u got the v/ cause u hard more punches and u were actually making sense in ur drop, where as PV was just running his bars together and tryin 2 make it LOOK like it had structure
so heres the breakdown
opener-neither were great
flow-RF
structure-RF
metas-neither really, but u used more
multis-RF
closer-RF
end result RF takes the v/

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I SPIT FLAMES//BEAT NIGGAZ LIKE RICK JAMES//FORGET AIM//CAUSE LIKE POSI-TRACTION I GRIP THINGS
PSA TAKIN OVER!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: ProVerse

NICE MAYNE PROVERSE KILLED WITH THE WORDPLAYS AND THE PUNCHES ADN MULTI'Z NICE COMBO//

ROYAL FLUSH U HAD GOOD ASS FLOW AND SOME PUNCHES BUT IT DIDNT EDGE U TO GET THE VOTE KEEP WORKIN ON DEM PUNCHES MAYNE//

YO PROVERSE RETURN AN FAV

DA LINK ITS IN MY SIG MAYNE

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Voted For: ProVerse

good shit pro good disses and punches alot of personals on his name was dope nice structure and flow good vocab6/10
royal good punches too disses kinda lacked here and your stuctures fucked up it kinda resmbeles a arrow 4/10

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