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Old 08-21-04, 07:02 AM   #1
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I don't want you to starve yourself
I don't want you to die
You can tell me anything
You dont have to lie

The first time you told me
I burst into tears
Im so sorry for all of this
I'll try to take away your fears

I will never forgive myself
If you leave us, to die
You can stick this out
It's ok to cry

I love you so very much
Please dont give up all hope
I'll be with you always
Even after you cope

It is so sad
Feels like a knife through my heart
It hurts me to see you like this
tearing yourself apart

I thought you were ok
"No one can have problems like mine"
But I was very wrong
You were so far from fine

You made yourself throw up
Just so you could stay thin
You gave yourself so much pain
You cut deeply through your skin

These things they honestly scare me
And I love you too much
So I hope I never see you
With a knife in your clutch

You have no idea how worried I am
I'm so desperate I will get on my knees
I'm asking you, I'm begging you
please.............................
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Old 08-21-04, 07:12 AM   #2
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Heavy poem, must have taken time. Look forward to seein sum mo rhymes. Peace

Check my battles:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143324 Elusiv G vs. Invader_ZIM

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143098 Elusiv G vs. SLick SKillz

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143810 Elusiv G vs. lyrical metaphor

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