alright this is my checking we already established the rules soo just spit within ten minutes of chekcin

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

OK nigga u so weak your mom feals it//
git off the keyboared and lt her spit//
u may aleast get one win//
faggots like you got no skills//
you jack off to a bag of skittles//
you probably think your the bomb//
cause you stay at home fuckin' your mom//
u have no rhymes with wits//
looks like this sites goin' to the idiots//
be like Usher, Let it Burn//
Come on faggot its your turn//

bigpimpn you just a newb to this game
im gonna merk you and put you to shame
one more battle i dont need to try for
cause we know when the votes hit 5-0 is the score
i dont know why we battling ur no competition
ur rhymes are recycled all i hear is repitition
sooo when ur rhymes are wack and u have no wins
just pray to god and the holy spirit u have no sins
cause when im done with you u'll be burning in hell
your just another man hore get ass raped and ur body you sell
soo when you see the RED DOT on your forehead think of me
cause i will have u in a state of shock seizures like epilepsy
this battles done take for me to take my bow
no oncoures please... just kill this bitch NOW

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

oo i messed up on the next to the last line.. it should be... this battles done time for me to take a bow.. sorry

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

Come on we uppin fr votes. Don't Sleep on us.

waz up y'all i stopped by 2 peep diz battle & i can say reddot took diz 1 bigpimp'n cuz red had mo punchlines & came harder wit his rhymes 2 command diz win

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sup i cant vote yet jus joined yesterday but ill say who i think won and if this battle aint done by the time i get my posts up ill come back and hit it..

big pimpin your verse was aite but you need to start elevating. pick a different structure to use and explore some more vocab. that way your puches will hit better.

red dot your verse was good, nice flow, punches wre good and your verse was structued better. to elevate all you need to do is to concentrate more on ripping the otha person rather than promoting yourself.

unofficial vote = red dot

while ya waiting for soem vote hit this up with a fair vote...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130569

v/redot

weak battle no punches especially for bigpimpion up your structure and elevate and learn how to make punches

red's lines actually flowed and rhymed which made him win

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can u return the favor and plzzz vote on my battles

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first off red u just plainly had better rymes and vocab then the other.
red was the winner of this one clearly thats why i'm votin red.
and big pimpin seems llike the only person ur pimpin is your mom cuz ur rymes are wack , so red this ones urs.
call me red call me.

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Death is Upon us....

Dis battle was good
the only problem is that I cant vote yet
Ill be sure to vote on dis one

give it 2 Red Dot his flow
was better n it made sense
plus he really didn't have 2
try cuz Bigpimpn's flow was
kinda wack
v/Red Dot
vote on my battles
DRAG~ON[P-S-A] VS ECKO(CS)
definatfully(punchline)
Jono

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Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
Red. his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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I think redot has this one... i liked his punches... he had some real good word play...
Big pimpin.. i likd yours but i htink red got this.. yours was too predictable and i new what was comin... just keep elevatin!

Return tha fava and vote on mah battles!! \/ \/ \/ \/ Down there!