Battle Rules:

6-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 12:55 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Mc Nem-E-sis has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 12:20 PM.

JaC M. WrIgHt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 12:21 PM.

Ill shit all over put dis mc on deep freeze,Hit dese ill rip these.Knife?Ill stab u wid my keyz,Dis fake mc will get da chop like trees,U juss went from high hopes 2 a boi wid miseries,Used 2 b a playa used 2 smoke weed,Shutup nigga or ill make u bleed,Cut u up dish u up as a bird feed,Flushin mc's down da loo,if u dont believe me ur herb-ass crew,I think 2 deep i think 2 long.dont get me wrong,2 u im 2 strong,Krush u as if i was king kong,Juss sittin here gettin vex,Dont know wot bullshit u gonna text out next,Im juss sayin watch ur lip,coz next time u spit ull find urself in a 12 foot pit.

homie why the fuck aint u spittin lyrics that make sense?// 1
no doubt that u leavin with a loss, aint no false pre-tense// 2
so ima let fly with my flows an let the slaughter com-mence// 3
an it's hard to write personals when your flows so weak an irrelevant// 4
so i'll take a shot at rhymin like you, ready? fairy floss an pink elephants// 5
well fuck that, i like my flows to be on track, intelligent an benevolent// 6
an i dont know if that verse was meant to be a joke~or~not// 7
or whether u a crackhead an u just had a smoke~or~not// 8
but either way u better recognise that in this battle u gonna fall// 9
an that even if u were in the NBA u still couldn't ball// 10

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Voted For: JaC M. WrIgHt

Totally bcoz Nem-E-Sis used Roll Deep lyrics throughout the whole fuckin battle and tryed to hide it by changin word here n theren it made no sense lol. Jac, your verse was pretty nice tho. Good work

vote: Jac M. Wright

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Voted For: JaC M. WrIgHt

yo i can actually READ ur rap. McNem-E-sis needs 2 go back 2 skool and learn how 2 write.

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Voted For: Mc Nem-E-sis

i'll go wit mc nemesis , only cuz the punches were harder your structure or lack of i should say was well a lil off , but what matters are the words right? right so yea i'll go wit u on this on e all love and no hate for jac m.wright you had a better structure but your punches and personals werent as good so this one goes to mc nem e sis

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Voted For: JaC M. WrIgHt

jac got this one for flow punches everthing good battle to tha both ya tho

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