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6 - unlimated
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-30-04 at 05:07 AM

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illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 05:08 AM.

mjgren
battlin me is obscene
im the best no need to compete
one question why is ya flow so long
yo ya aint no m.c come on
why are ya even tryin it
all ya raps ya liyin in it
in a few minutes ya grave ya be lyin in it
i got rap on lock
i spend time wrightin while ya off suckin cock
my gun ill shot thourgh ya vest
straight to ya chest
lose ya breath
feel te power of death
ill walk to ya grave see ya family greavin
walk away then leave there ass not breathin

MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 05:56 AM.

yo i'm like a dragon cuz when i spit fire comes out,
My skills will make you spin you'll think you're on a roundabout,
You say you wanna ice me cuz ur a G, but ur just a wannabe,
i'm gonna relenquish this win same way i did your mommy/

I'm a livewire, and when u spit lyrics your shit seems old,
people are standing next to me cuz i'm hot and ur shit is cold,
untold, is what your reputation is, i'm bold, dont care what the situation is,
I'ma beat you so bad in fron of this whole rapping nation,
you'll get murked so bad you'll be on permenant vacation/

You think you're fly, dont try, you lie i win so you might as well die,
my rapping is ominous to everyone who trys to test,
your girl is screaming in bed saying 'Mj's the best!'/

i'm feeling a liitle bit sorry for you now dawg,
you mommas to fat she needs to go on an 8 mile jog,
i'ma pour gasoline on you and ignite my fire,
i spit my rhymes and you're in a burning desire/

newcomer wins and knocks your ass right to the floor,
your now unconscious and on the hospital tour,
i start a war, knock on my door begging cuz ur skills are too poor, asking me if i will accept your mom whos a whore,
my punchlines hit you straight into the wall,
i murked you so bad i'm walking through death row hall/

this is my last bit and i'm sorry your shit aint evolved,
once i kill you the case will remain unsolved,
your staring at my crotch thinking your sick,
you're just jealous cuz of ur 2 inch dick/

you're verse is whack half didn't rhyme, i shortened my shit hopefully it'll be ok now, maybe a bar too long but its readable.

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Voted For: MjGrEeN

Nice Battle....
Illuson Ya Need'a ELEVATE Next Time, Step Ya Game Up
Use Better Punches n Try Addin Some Humour
But Propps

MJGREEN...Nice Verse, Ya Structure Was Better, You Had Better Wordplay, An The Few Punches You Dropped Made Me Take Note Of Ya Verse

My Votes Goes Too MJGREEN

Propps Ya'll.....
Good Lookin!

Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles Ya'll
Peeeeeacccceee

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Voted For: MjGrEeN

Opener- MjGreen- both was crappy but u got it cause illusions sucked
Closer- Mj Green - It was kinda funny and illusion was kinda messed up
Punches- Mj Green- not really that much but u got it cause he didnt have that much
Enjoyed- Mj Green


this was kinda a weak battle but i think it was kinda one sided

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UPPIN 4 VOTES..............................lets get some more votes here guyz will repay the favour if you vote...aiming to get first win here.

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Voted For: MjGrEeN

MJGREEN GOT THIS 1.....BETTA FLOW,OK PUNCHLINES,THA OTHA GUY WAS TALKIN BUT HISSELF LIKE IT WAS A FREESTYLE.....THIS WASNT A REAL GOOD BATTLE

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