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Old 09-10-04, 06:56 PM   #1
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Sick World!!!

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THE WORLD IS SICK LIKE EBOLA AND AIDS WHEN THEY MIX!!!/
LIKE HUMANS HAVING SEX WIT ANIMALS, MAKE YA WANNA SPIT!!!/
KIDS GET GRIPPED AND WHIPPED OR SOMETIMES RAPE!!!/
EVEN SATANIST SKINNED KIDS TIL' THEY GOT NO FACE!!!/
BONES OUT OF PLACE, MURDER HAPPENS WITHOUT A SIGN OR A TRACE!!/
AND EVEN THE TERRORISTS TRYIN TO WIPE OUT HALF OF THE RACE!!/
WE NEED GOD'S GRACE IN THIS NATION CAUSE ABOMINATION IS WHAT WE FACIN/
PEOPLE PRAYING OUT OF DESPERATION
BECAUSE DRUGS, SEX, AND MONEY IS THE WORLD'S EDUCATION!!!/
EVEN TEENS HAVE SEX IN CHURCHES WIT NO HESITATION!!/
(sexual) PERVERSIONS HITTIN THE EARTH WIT FULL PENETRATION!!/
HERE'S AN EXPLANATION!!/
LESBIANS AND GAYS INCREASES FROM GENERATIONS TO GENERATIONS!!/
THE WORLD'S FINAL DESTINATION IS IN REVELATION!!/
WHAT I'M SAYIN AIN'T NO PRESENTATION CAUSE SICKNESS STANDS/
I CAN'T UNDERSTAND WHY EVIL MOMS THROW BABIES IN TRASH CANS/
AND IT USE TO BE MAN MAKIN THE MONEY NOW THE MONEY MAKIN THE MAN,
NOW DARKNESS EXPANDS!!!/
SO YOU START LIVIN THE SAME LIFE TIL YA OLD AND ASHY!!/
SO WHAT'S THE POINT OF MONEY IF YOU CAN'T EVEN BE HAPPY!!/
THE THINGS I'VE SEEN IS EVIL, IT'S LETHAL!!/
AND WHY DO SEXUAL IDOLATERS HAVE SEX WIT DEAD PEOPLE!!/
THIS WORLD IS CURSE AND IT'S ABOUT TO BE WORST!!!!!!/
IF GOD WASN'T LOVE, HE'LL EXPLODE US WIT NUCLEAR WEAPONS THAT'S BIGGER THAN THE EARTH!!!!!/
THIS SICKNESS MAKES ME HURL, MY MIND SWIRL TIL THE POINT MY EYES START TO TWIRL!!!/
I'M LIKE A SLAVE IN A CAGE, JUST STUCK IN THIS SICK WORLD!!!

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Old 09-11-04, 11:03 AM   #2
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Give me som Feedback!!

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Anybody who reads this, can ya give me some feedback and tell me what ya think iight...PEACE
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Old 09-11-04, 01:43 PM   #3
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wow, nice and raw, you spit fya here, it sounds like open mic material as well, it shows your emotion, good content too, and i agree with some of the points you made, good piece man.....1
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Old 09-12-04, 05:23 PM   #4
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first joint i ever read by you... i see your not ashamed of your religion either... that's a good thing.. more people should have God in their lives... you had some real valid points in this piece... you've been watching the world... your eyes are open to the evils being done... keep spreading your message, man... maybe some of the others will wake up and change the way they live one day... maybe they'll remember this poem.... you never know what can change a persons life... words are very powerful weapons when used correctly... good shyt, yo... keep doing ya thizzle!
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