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Old 09-28-04, 09:31 PM   #1
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You Dirty Whore.....Freestyle

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Yo look

Your loyalty shifts more than that of John Walker
You ride the dick so much I could call u a 'ball stalker'
Ya rhymes aint witty, just straight up shitty
U been merked so many times ya alias is 'kenny'
You wanna be someone ya not, so u fake hot
Not even close to warm, u just a 'cold spot'
Your claimed talent is missing call an amber alert
U soft like virgin pussy and this 'lyrical rape' is gone hurt
Why u keep droppin weak shit? Nobody bothers to read it
Stop tellin ya fictional sob stories, Nobody here needs it
You want sympathy? Hit up an emergency hot line
You bathe in self-glory but i aint seen u spit a 'hot line'
I give respect to where respect is most due
And you transluscent cuz i can 'see the bitch in you'
You can continue to act tough and play rough
But in the end you'll get exposed like a 'nudist in handcuffs'
You can call it this 'beef', cuz its all games and fun
That is until i serve ya ass on a platter 'well done'
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Old 09-29-04, 10:36 AM   #2
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^^^uppin this summagun^^^
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Old 09-29-04, 12:04 PM   #3
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waddup good diss even tho i dont kno who its to..whats wit ur name it sounds familiar..
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Old 09-29-04, 06:57 PM   #4
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yeah!! I liked this whole thing..bitche's aint shit!!!!!
But who did you write this for?
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Old 09-29-04, 07:09 PM   #5
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it was aight, sum parts were a lil iffy cause i didnt really understand the point of it, but 4 tha most part it was good. nice wordplay/ punches. keep it up....
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