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Old 02-15-05, 07:53 PM   #1
JRoy
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My Life TRUE STORY PLEASE READ.....

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Man this some real deeep stuff....please read i'll leave feedback 2 anyones....this is what really happend in my life

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School,cant even get proppa education
Without the rednecks and shit waiting
Outside of every classroom,
I'm thinking to myself how soon
I'mma have to try and plow through
All the jealous and hate they create
Get through the journey with my faith
Heavenly gates,i cant wait
I'm in a horrible mental state as of late
seems like no times passin
ANd peopels thoughts and how i'm reacting
Go thru the doors hear them all laughing
Cuz i'm white and i enjoy the art rap
One of these days i know i'll snap
Now man lets bring um back


Bring um back to when i was a child
at the age of 2 social security was filed
Why cuz my father had passed away
Mom preyed to see um an other day
In my heart is where he would stay
Remeber in videos him calling me j
Without a dad growing up was hard
Mom was brusied,beaten and scared
Why cuz she needa man in her life
The only man she needed was the lord christ
But she didnt see it eyes filled of the world
IT was the devil lying to her
So i lived up without a momz too
For my grandmas and grandpas where i grew




Growing up with grams and gramps
Was pefect soil for this plant
Till i was at the age of 9 or 10
Thats when all the drinkin begins
Grandpa cheating on my grams
Thinkin hows that in gods plans
I remember staying up and cryin
Thinkin that they were all just lyin
False engery they was supplying
Uncle shawn and my grandpa fighting
Next up grams and gramps gotta divorce
Just me and grandma holding the fort
With no man for an other support
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Old 02-15-05, 07:57 PM   #2
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Old 02-15-05, 08:12 PM   #3
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This is Family Life Pt.1 there will be 2 Parts
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Old 02-15-05, 08:16 PM   #4
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hey i was feeling this.. my favorite parts were:

All the jealous and hate they create
Get through the journey with my faith
Heavenly gates,i cant wait
I'm in a horrible mental state as of late
seems like no times passin
ANd peopels thoughts and how i'm reacting
Go thru the doors hear them all laughing
Cuz i'm white and i enjoy the art rap
One of these days i know i'll snap
Now man lets bring um back

^^you weren't prancing around your message, you came str8 to the point but it was done in a really good way..

Grandpa cheating on my grams
Thinkin hows that in gods plans
I remember staying up and cryin
Thinkin that they were all just lyin
False engery they was supplying
Uncle shawn and my grandpa fighting
^^i liked this portion too..

i can't wait to read the rest of this piece or the part 2 of it..
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Old 02-15-05, 08:19 PM   #5
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no doubt...thanks for the feedback...u got anything leave some links?
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Old 02-15-05, 08:22 PM   #6
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naw i just leave feedback on other people's things i dun expect nothing from anybody.. i like checkin out people's stuff, just droppin support..
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Old 02-15-05, 08:24 PM   #7
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thanks a lot for the support i need it bad......got real bad today at school man cant be white and rap where i live
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Old 02-15-05, 08:27 PM   #8
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i thought u was Indian

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Old 02-15-05, 08:30 PM   #9
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Quote:
Originally Posted by -Mathmatics-
i thought u was Indian

lmao

fake ass

U dont even know what i'm feeling right now man........and how i feel so just hush...today wasn't good
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Old 02-15-05, 08:49 PM   #10
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Uppin...............
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Old 02-15-05, 09:55 PM   #11
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well...u told me to check this out and shit..it was straight...but like i said man this aint nuffin compared to what i been threw...every real nigga can tell u they didnt grow up wit a father dead or not dead...i kno my father died at 14..which is harder ckuz i knew him...my moms is trippin wit my damn money i aint gettin none of that...my grandmother had a stroke and heart attack...at the same time...so yea u aint really been threw alot...=\
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Old 02-15-05, 10:26 PM   #12
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U dont even know whats happening right now Diabolic....man if you knew..and were in my shoes..you would wanna go back 2 your "hood life" real quick
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Old 02-15-05, 10:59 PM   #13
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you havent been through alot...seems like a normal life really
except you tryed to elaberate on minor things.......

lyrically it is soft.....bars seem to short..........and yes you can say I left this feed cause I hate you!!!!

Im not a hater but ever since I came to this site...I have noticed you as one of the most pathetic individuals to ever enter a rap site.


your peice of text-5/10
your struggle- what struggle?
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Old 02-16-05, 01:19 AM   #14
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SHUT DA FUCK UP UR2EZ

nigga u aint been through shit

yo Diabolic, no offense or hate but try hav'n both parents and still cant afford ya rent or shit

all ma shit i got comes from a long list like ma whole family com'n 2gether to get me sumtin, dats real

so if i got a Ipod dats cuz 6 otha ppl in ma family had to buy wit 2gether
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Old 02-16-05, 02:00 AM   #15
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in such little lines you wrote damn thats alot of shit youve been threw kinda relates to me execpt for the grandpa and grandma part my gramps and grams are cool but my grams died like 4 monthes ago sad shit but anyway that was some emotional shit word some good flowing i wouldnt midn seeing it audio and i think i can tell thats what you plan on doin with this unless you already have then word lets check it haha, but yo man much love that was a good peice your family should respect that you took time to use all dem multis
peace

also yo i droped a new collab wit Prolifik the links in my sig
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