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09-11-04, 01:05 PM
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Urgent Help
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EMINEM LYRICS - Guilty Conscience
Announcer: Meet Eddie, 23 years old. Fed up with life, and the way things are going, he decides to rob a liquor store (I can't take this no more, I can't take it no more, homes) But on his way in, he has a sudden change of heart. And suddenly, his conscience comes into play Dr. Dre: Alright, stop! (Huh?) Now before you walk in the door Of this liquor store And try to get money out the drawer You'd better think of the consequence (But who are you?) I'm your motherfuckin' conscience Eminem: That nonsense Go in and gaffle the money, and run to one of your aunt's cribs. And borrow one of her damn dresses And one of her blonde wigs. Tell her you need a place to stay You'll be safe for days If you shave your legs With aged razor blade Dr. Dre: Yeah, but if it all goes through Like it's supposed to The whole neighbourhood knows you And they'll expose you. Think about before you walk in the door first. Look at the store clerk, She's older then George Burns. Eminem: Fuck that. Do that shit. Shoot that bitch Can you afford to blow this shit? Are you that rich? Why you give a fuck if she dies? Are you that bitch? You really think *she* gives a fuck If you have kids? Dr. Dre: Man, don't do it. It's not worth it To risk it. (You're right) Not over this shit. (Stop) Drop the biscuit. (I will) Don't even listen to Slim, yo. He's bad for you. (Eminem: You know what, Dre? I don't like your attitude.) [sound of static] ("It's all right, c'mon, just come in here for a minute") ("Mmm, I don't know") ("Look, baby...") ("Damn!") ("look, it's gonna be all right, right?") ("Well, okay...") Announcer: Meet Stan, 21 years old (Give me a kiss) After meeting a young girl at a rave party, thing's start getting hot and heavy in an upstairs bedroom. Once again, his conscience comes into play...(Shit!) Eminem: Now listen to me. While you're kissin' her cheek And smearin' her lipstick, slip this in her drink. Now all you gotta do is nibble on this little bitch's earlobe... (Dr. Dre: Yo, this girl's only 15 years old. You shouldn't take advantage of her, That's not fair.) Yo, look at her bush...Does it got hair? (Uh-huh.) Fuck this bitch right here on the spot bare. 'Till she passes out And she forgot how she got there. (Dr. Dre: Man, ain't you ever seen that one movie Kids?) No, but I seen a porno with some SunDoobiest!. (Dr. Dre: Shit, you wanna get hauled off to jail?) Man, fuck that, Hit that shit raw dawg and bail... [sound of static] [pickup idling, radio playing] Announcer: Meet Grady, a 29 year-old construction worker. After coming home from a hard day's work, He walks in the door of his trailer park home To find his wife in bed with another man. (Grady:WHAT THE FUCK?!?!) (WIFE;Grady?!) Dr. Dre: Alright, calm down. Relax, start breathin'... Eminem: Fuck that Shit You just caught this bitch cheatin'. While you at work, she's with some dude Tryin' to get off? Fuck slittin' her throat! CUT THIS BITCH'S HEAD OFF!!! Dr Dre: Wait, What if there's an explanation for this shit. (Eminem: What? She tripped? Fell? Landed on his dick?!) Alright, Shady. Maybe he's right, Grady. But think about the baby Before you get all crazy. Eminem: Okay! thought about it, Still wanna stab her? Grab her by the throat, Get you're daughter and kidnap her? That's what I did. Be smart, don't be a retard. You gonna take advice from somebody who slapped DEE BARNES? Dr. Dre: What'chu say!? (Eminem: What's wrong? Didn't think I'd remember?) I'ma kill you, motherfucker! Eminem: Ah-ah, Temper, temper! Mr. Dre? Mr. N.W.A? Mr. AK coming straight outta Compton Y'all better make way? How in the fuck you gonna tell this man not to be violent? Dr. Dre: Cuz he don't need to go the same route that I went. Been there, done that...Aw, fuck it...What am I sayin'? Shoot 'em both, Grady, where's your gun at? Okay I have given you a verse of eminem. All I want to know is how to rhyme up the bars like him and how to rhyme sound alikes and where to put them at the right time. Like I would rhyme the whole verse perfect so I need everything about sound alikes explained. All the rhymes I do understand are in bold the ones I don't understand are in red. So can you explain everything about flow and make me elevate it will be much appreciated. Just teach me about them sound alikes and how to do more then single word sound alikes like I mean up to two sylables long. |
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09-11-04, 01:12 PM
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GoD LiKe
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Not to be rude
But the way this rymed is very fuckin easy man You still dont have a fucking clue how to drop bars Yes as long as it has the same pronounciation or how ever the fuck you spell it Alright, Shady. Maybe he's right, Grady. But think about the baby Before you get all crazy. thay all end in Y GRAVY BABY EVEN ADD FUCKIN JAY Z IT ALL SOUNDS THE SAME WHEN ITS SAID If you cant read a ryme of his or hear a verse by any rapper, and figure out how to drop a line that rymes followed by another lines that rymes Then rap aint for you dog NO BEEF but you been pissin alot of people off with this shit CONSTANT SPAM PMS AND SHIT NOT COOL
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09-11-04, 01:19 PM
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IP:
I never had beef wid you I just wanted people to answer my mutha fuckin question dats all. Like sound alikes yea this is the question I wanted to know why we have rhymes like dis
Think about before you walk in the door first. Look at the store clerk, She's older then George Burns. There is three lines dat rhyme yea. They are single rhymes I get dem but there is a confusion with 2 sylable rhymes get me?. I can't explain anymore den dat I just don't get dat it's hard to explain I can rap just let me know how to do it. peace no beef people. |
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09-11-04, 01:22 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP:
ok i never see and study how the line rhymes i just od it...by osund of ear...its not that hard...your getting too into it...
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09-11-04, 01:29 PM
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GoD LiKe
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IP:
DUDE
NOBODY HAS A CLUE HOW TO HELP YOU NO MORE THAN WE ALREADY HAVE GO READ OTHER PEOPLES SHIT ON THIS SITE THEY KNOW HOW TO DO IT AND THEY WERENT TAUGHT Sinner this shit is old if this was audio i would tell you to shut your trap JUST FACE THE FACKS AND CUT THE CRAP before i drop the pimp slap Your not like EM and never will be so find a new idol and quit rap YOU ARE FILL IN THE BLANKS _ _ _ _ and i aint for CHIT CHAT WACK dude i dont know man THIS IS ALL I COULD COME UP WITH FOR YOU IT ALL RYMED BUT THEY HAD DIFFERENT SOUNDS Facts chat rap slap wack chit chat AS BASIC AS I CAN BE DO YOU UNDA STAND YET LOL
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09-11-04, 01:38 PM
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IP:
right I understand you now a bit better. So is it really your own purpose if you wanted to rap sound alikes?. Like if you want to rhyme 4 lines up you can do is dat what ur sayin?
How can this chump out run me he's neally passed away he's seventy fuck you bitch you are my enemy i'll drain you bitch plus all ya energy guide me what im doing all the questions are there man im tryin my best to elevate. |
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09-11-04, 01:30 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP:
word.....your confusing me with how in depth you go into just rhyming....yuo are obsessed with that and minem.......go look at tutorials....
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09-11-04, 01:32 PM
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Heavy Lies The Crown
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IP:
^ lmao
damn
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09-11-04, 01:37 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP:
quote that....lol
Im like confused I didnt know there was a science to rapping So your sayin Locksmith, Eyedea, and all those other battlers think "Well the square root of pie multiplied by the quotiont of the degrees celcius in the room divided by the number of fan's breathes per minute= A dope punch with good assonance rhyming"
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09-11-04, 03:35 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP:
Quote:
shit this is a legendary quotable...
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09-11-04, 01:39 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP:
well ummmmmm like
i shoot it goes kapoot poot poot i loot r im dope bitch like jello slap bitches round yellin hello quote dat sickness^
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09-11-04, 02:48 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP:
this is fuckin ridiculous-- write rhymes and stop askin so many damb questions about it-- I know I alone have given you in depth answers to this and every other question just like it-- your problem is you read the answer and go try and write and damn-- its not like eminem wrote it so you think your doing something wrong when in fact you just need to shut the fuck up and start writing more. foreal.. this shit is getting annoying.
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09-11-04, 03:01 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
give him a break , he jus wanna learn , it .. it dont come natural to everyone.. props to him for trying.. cuz shit i know i am still lear'n to
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09-11-04, 03:07 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP:
word but asking the exact same question 50 times because you didn't get it the first time is just ridiculous.
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