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Old 09-12-04, 03:01 PM   #1
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Thumbs up taking you to the CCCP

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i'm from the cccp where catz is always good at boxing...
you no me and my dawg carry an ox and...
you ain't really seen a hood until you been through russia...
the place where if you got money than they can't touch ya...
but if you fuck wit me then the hosipatol where thay gonna have to rush ya...
i take you back to when no one gave a shit about the people...
when not only the government was but the everyone evil...
why when we came to the land of the free they call us illegal...
ya'll cats still talk about guns, but i'll finish you wit a hammer and sickle...
i must be a vampire cause i get excited wit the sight of blood trickle...

ok feedback it just sometin to get post up so holla at it
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Old 09-12-04, 03:52 PM   #2
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this was weak... it was really short...and had like no moral or theme behind it ...it just basically talkes about were your from...and i really wasnt feelin it... your structure was okay... but it would hav been better if you centered it ...overall keep it up elevate..and you'll be fine..
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