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09-14-04, 02:13 AM | #1 | |||||
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they say its the root of death
money make u take yo last breath cuz all it takes is to rob the wrong one soon enuff u gon b facin dem guns maybe pull up jus park n blast or kick in the dow and kill yo ass money makes people do crazy acts and that right there is a known fact it might b the reason i make u get on the ground it might b the reason yo bodys not found or maybe the reason that i get shot maybe the reason i end up like pac but wit out the records and all the fame so if i got shot no one would remember my name but o well thas the life i live i dont regret the shit i did if u live by the gun u gon prolly die by it so if u aint ready for this game dont try it ...this is a freestyle, or keystyle or whateva the fuck u wanna call it, jus bored n wanted to spit somethin leave some feedback....1
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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB -crunchy blac(three 6 mafia) i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged -styles p(the lox) u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice -I 20 Quote:
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09-14-04, 01:12 PM | #2 | |||||
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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB -crunchy blac(three 6 mafia) i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged -styles p(the lox) u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice -I 20 Quote:
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09-14-04, 01:15 PM | #3 | |||
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work on ur structure a bit, choose some better vocab, otherwise its pretty good.
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