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Old 08-11-04, 08:42 PM   #1
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Truly Hell On Earth

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((( The Home )))

~Thee Escape A Chance To Recover~
~Clearing Misty Thoughts,Physically Closer To Lovers~
~The Only People You Can Absorb Complete Trust From~
~The Ones That Comfort You When Your Intentions Turn To Run~
~Run Away From The Positive And Swim Into The Negative~
~As The Street Elements......
~ Drown You To Murder Others Or Yourself Thinkin You'll Make Da Best Of It~
~Relatives, The Wise The Soldiers That Have Ben Engraved Along Your Way~
~But The Home In Which You Stay....
~Is Your Rest Were Calmness Shadows You..And Your Pillows Help You Explore...
Dream N Dream Of Better Days~

(((The NeighboorHood )))
~The Location Of Crime Soaring Upon Another Level~
~Were It Seems All Actions Are Beating Threw The Heart Of The Devil~
~Pride Is A Requirement A Lust A Gate Open Or Closed To Be Brave~
~If Bravery Isn't Portrayed,It Opens Portals To Your Caged Home Or Fearfully Grave~
~Climbin The Coldest Mountain To Reach A Peak Out,Only Threw Plans~
~But Other people Scream At Your Prize And Turn It To An Avalanche~
~Rolling Backward To The Bottom Melting Ice Picks To Stab Your Chance~
........Your Chance Your Freedom Your Only Way Out.........
~Usually Your Snow Spreads Snatching Others Within A Cold Grin~
~The God Led The God Bullet Killing Humans Smooth Out Your Second Wind~
~Angers Released,But There Is More To Discover Touch And Reach~
~The Streets,The Outworld Swallowing You Into The Belly Of The Beast~

((( Main Product )))
~Its Sucking You In,The Reaking Smell Every Were You Go~
~Without It Seems Every Other Escape Route Is Slow~
~Crack Or Coke,Its Arms Retracting To Grasp My Throat~
~Yelling Sell Me Or Buy Me Ether This Or Rap You Hoe~
~Victims From This Poison Lost..But They Never Belive It Though~
~And There Own Kind Feeding To Them Just To Witness There Meal Ticket Grow~
~Yet The Giver Or Receiver Is Still Stuck In This Hell~
~While The Giver Is Escaping Hell,They Could Slip Up
Or Someone Would Snitch Up And Laws Handcuffs Lock Them In Jails~
~But It May Not Be Police,A Clone A Kid Just Like Them On The Streets~
~Demanding Absolute Power,Forcing Them To Bow To There Knees~

((( The Gods )))
~The Grim Reaper That Decides Life Or Death~
~In Seconds It Spits Bullets Smoking In A Mortals Flesh~
~Happens Everyday Not Touching The Front Of Change But The Victims Family Is Felt~
~When That Man Or Woman Behind The Gun Thinks Gods Power Has Switched From Him
To Them Selves~
~Yet It Seems Its The Only Thing That Can Keep You Breathing~
~And Belive Me,Indenting Its Being Upon Your Palm Is Easy~
~But With The Gun Do You Have The Strength To Takes Someone Life~
~Breath The Darkness Or Exhale The Shines Reflecting Light~

** This Is The Ultimate Reality Truly Hell On Earth **

........To Be Continued With ""Heaven On Earth"".........

~1~ MiCc
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Old 08-13-04, 03:17 AM   #2
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hott drop kidd...had alot of emotion in it...and some good vocab...nice wordplay 2...had nice flow 2 it...dat shyt was long as hell tho...but it's iight it was a good read...return da favor...peace
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Old 09-15-04, 11:39 AM   #3
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Old 09-15-04, 01:34 PM   #4
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wow, this was great, your vocab was very good, and descriptive, you seem to have a knack for this kind of writing as well as battles, i liked the subject too, i feel you on this, true scenes as well in this piece, you should add it to the open mic forum as well,because it seemed more like that type of piece, but awesome job, i'd like to see more...pc
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