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insanejoka666 5 100.00%
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Old 09-12-04, 07:51 PM   #1
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insanejoka666 vs str8_hood

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topic: a person who you loved which was lost..

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Old 09-12-04, 07:53 PM   #2
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Old 09-12-04, 08:07 PM   #3
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InsaneJoka666 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 08:07 PM.
 
Old 09-12-04, 09:39 PM   #4
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(I tried to sleep but my x come back )
In my dreams all the people I let down came back to me
I talked with Emilie and wore a shirt that said “Week 3”
Birthday season coming up, and all she’d said was ‘Speak to me’
I held her joyfully, I was back to meaning
Through the lack of breathing I was back to being me
I’ve tracked my reasoning over a thousand times
And found not one clue to why I crossed the lines
I must’ve lost my mind, but won’t take shit back
Hell she probably don’t remember me, I’ll live with that
But one thing that I won’t do’s, show up in some phone booth
And hopefully open up some hole to stroll through
Just to give my ass another chance at driving you postal
I owe you some closure, so you know these post hu-mous
Possibilities reside in my mind where this crying about
“You miss her, admit it, you messed up this one” abound
The only the sounds other than them are drowned out
Like downtown pleas for help on New Year’s countdowns
I’ve been reeling for ideas but I’m finally out now
Slinking to a phone booth, head down, I’m the clown now

(verse 2)

If I don’t love her, why’s she the only one I ever told
About the wrists, bout the old, bout the risks bout the hopes
Like Christmas clothes, my eyes are bloody and my memories fuzzy
It’s funny, I should’ve been the Maid of Honor but ain’t even coming
Isn’t it something
I deserve it though, I was the one running
Now I see: you flourish, I’m foolish, stuck in the mud’n
In the bottom of nothing but a bottle a something
Or other, like it even matters, bring me another
I need another, and another, dammit, bring me another
I think of your mother ‘It sounds like you’re in love”
It wasn’t sin, it wasn’t in A love, it just was one
Now I’m escaping from madness went from had it to lack it
‘Til I’m cloaked in a sadness like it’s some sort’a jacket
Paying for what I done like you were holding it ransom
Still the fact’s in the actions, this I learned out’a habit
Since I did you so badly, I’ma burn and be happy
Turn to see gladly that the devil is laughing

(verse 3)
If it wasn’t for you…where would I be now?
Probably up at some crackfiends house breaking weed out
I straight tossed away something you can’t even read ‘bout
The world could’a learned but girl it’s just you and me now
The peace spent renting movies meant more than jewelery
My memories of evenings leave a fiending for you and me
To be again, kiss your face, touch your hair; breathe it in
I felt and held a love deeper than the sands’a sea have been
I need a pen, seeing what I lost’d drive a man to bleed again
I didn’t see it then, emotion wasn’t gone, but hidden
Tempting me to leave a friend, and end the life worth livin’
Then existence quivered ‘tween a thing that is and isn’t
What remained wasn’t convincing since I didn’t even listen
I was missing you before I ever knew what I was gon’a do
Wishing you were with me when I heard the Schwabe-Tom news
When you weren’t I went alone, scared, that’s why I bombed you
It was the first time I had ever felt afraid since I found you
So I clowned you, got pissed, and hid ‘til you got missed
Then blamed, like you’re the one being the adolescent bitch
Valuable lesson it is, somehow it still didn’t stick
Feeling overwhelmed, heard the ring and never did pick up shit
I know you’re fed up with the run arounds that never cease,
Best friend and police as enemies, the sex tease
And next he’s on knees with a new piece of apologies
I’d switch the pride I’m swallowing with glass to see you calling me
And lastly, how I want to see the happiness it used to be
But I can deal with feeling how we do when thinking you and me
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Old 09-13-04, 07:52 PM   #5
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i wont b able to drop my verse cause stuff came up and i was busy but it would be cool if we could jus set up another one and jus to b safe set it for like 2 days. anway let me kno what u think
 
 


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