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10-06-04, 05:05 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Upsetting Memories
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Upsetting memories, he begins to feel sorrow
Wishing that today was the last and there was no tomorrow Some so distraught they just won’t leave And he cannot continue on but will continue to grieve These memories won’t leave from inside his head A plead from him for this memory to be dead A tear starts to build in the back of his head He becomes flustered, eyes turning red A long breath, and finally a deep sigh The tear slowly drips down from his eye Scaling down the cheek and slips off the chin Too upset, not even able forge a grin What was this event that had to occur? It is unknown, but he again reaches for his liquor One swig and another bottle is finished A once proud man, his stature has diminished No longer able to keep himself up straight Getting well and moving on is not something he will contemplate Once accomplished and respected After this event he’s been completely defected This memory has ruined his existence All the pain, he no longer has any resistance The memory has brought suicide as the only option into his thought He and the memory have constantly fought, Now it will end as he ties the final knot Slips the loop over his head, it scratches down his face He believes he will be forget this upsetting memory by leaving this place As he loses his footing on the stool, he struggles to remain Even in his last moments he fights against the memories pain He begins to turn blue and the memory starts to fade This is the choice he has made, the ultimate price he has paid An upsetting memory can be extremely powerful and influential The loss of one’s life can be its greatest potential. |
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10-09-04, 04:28 AM | #2 | |||||||
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upppppin....leave some feedback, and ill definatly check your piece out
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10-12-04, 03:07 PM | #3 | |||||||
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yo come on people don't sleep on this shit...
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10-13-04, 01:01 PM | #4 | |||||
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this was really good, great flow, all around nice poem, felt the emotion in this, keep em comin...1
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