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09-19-04, 07:56 PM | #1 | |||||
Houdini
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Tattered'And Torn
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Like the people say, Im better off dead cuz
Everysingle day, Another problem gets caused Another hate is flamed,and I get blamed Another devil is born, and I get blamed for his ways Getting aquitted for Spitten Flippin the world off and they all think that Im wiggin What kinda life do we live in Maybe that, dream was right.....I am who I hang with When this faith Is tattered' and torn When I hope and pray 2 be reborn The same old thing replays, and then the skies storm Coldness in hearts, pumping Ice,while I was still born Hate in my eyes, cause when I tried to cry I was pushed around picked on, and the world wants 2 see me die Damn I wish they was watching......them angels in disguise 17, 18 in october Whatever happend to this happiness, and fearlessness I had over Fuck....Im outta whack anyways...Maybe this piece makes you see more'
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09-20-04, 09:46 AM | #2 | |||||
Houdini
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09-20-04, 12:06 PM | #3 | |||||
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this was good, nice rhymin in this poem, good imagery, and overall nice short piece about your emotions....keep up....pc
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