What ya'll all been waiting for. The Grim Reaper is here muthafuckas..........

Feed back please

(Yes it is a freestyle)
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/gdeucemusic.htm

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Grim

Deuce............................the flow is good at times it clips....but overall nice drop........nice story...lol now finally hoe we can collab

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ight, uppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn dis shitttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

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Grim

nice drop for a freestyle...i think you couldnt gone without the long pauses
in your verse....just flow right through but nice shit

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O Know, He's Back!

coo, uppin for more feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed back...........

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Grim

Hoe show some love back on couple tracks..lol dont be greedy nitty now..

Choose from

World Drama

or

The Way Of Life.

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Already listened the way of life fam, why you trippin, and you know it was tight as well as I know it was tight. I haven't listened to the other one, but there you go pussy, lol, j/k.....

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Grim

SICK..... too bad ur in psa..

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Ill shit, gotta love that classic Luniz beat, I'm excited to hear you spit some written shit man...

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Yo people feelin it, uppppppppppppppppppppppin for more feedback...................

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Grim

You need some practice with Cool Edit.....or whatever program you're using. Vocals were a little loud and clipped a bit at points. You can cut the instrumental a little shorter too and fade your shit out so people don't sit there and expect some more rapping......lol. Nice track though

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Yeah, first time using coo edit, but I'm only concerned with what they think about the drop than the make up of it. I'll fix that on some later tracks.

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Grim

now by freestyle are you saying like a free write.. liek you wrote for the beat.. or are u saying u just found a beat listened for a minute.. then recorded w/e came out.. it sounded liek you wrote it.... just wondering which it is.. cause it definatly sound written..

but any formy thoughts..


it was strait.. i'd liek to hear more emotion tho... and those pauses need to be stopped lol... it was coo tho.. keep doin it

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

Yeah it was a freestyle. My real spit is more complex and when i drop some of my tracks off my demo, ya'll can see what i mean.

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