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Check in by: 09-16-04 at 01:02 PM

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LyricalDon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 12:34 PM.

You can floss like a baller and be in ya CADILLAC B// but im shootin through ya SHIELD just to put the DRIVER in the BACKSEAT!!!//

You claim you on TOP but i just regain the soul of this dude// and keep him on the bottom like the SOLE OF MY SHOE// ok

And im a make sure ya BALLS aint RESTIN// put the long nose down ya mouth and have you SHITTIN out ya SMALL INTESTINE!!!!

This GUNNA go to the cops and be peeil with his gums// Me and EAZY hang you with a rope from the ceilin by ya tongue//

I can be a man you a WOMAN but// the only time you see me soft is when im done bustin nuts//

You wanna feel the power of the 45 or the SMITH and WESSON clown// but the GAGE put you in the sky and have you lookin like you sittin down//
After i'm done i need vacation so im a find a spot to go to// and stay in FLORIDA more than a CUP of ORANGE JUICE// OK!

You cant take the GAGE so i guess LONG SLEEVES HURT// but the 9 grip to you so lets see how the SHORT SLEEVE WORK!!!// UH HUH
Fuck sellin you slugs im a keep em all free// and make ya CHEST HANG DOWN to ya KNEES like TALL TEES!!!//

Spiderman has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 01:02 PM.

Aight, check it...
Ur a big joke on this site, I've seen it, kid, you're lame
& how many heads on this site got Don in they name?
Like that retard Radio, with u we all change da station
So I'll give Lyrical some tips, cuz bum needs a Donation
To you, no one says wassup
You suck, you're outta luck, so just give up
Ur below most of us, like a nigga from the dirty South
Only time Spidey's nuttin' is when it's in ur girl's mouth
See, I'm lyrically ur superior, so bitch, just take a bow
I'll have all RV talkin' bout how LyricalDon-e did it now
Later

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Voted For: Spiderman

spiderman merked lyrical here, beta punches, much beta structure n flow n had some gud wordplay in there too...o.k battle....keep droppin

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Voted For: Spiderman

woah... Lyrical... your style sucks...
Imma break this down simple...
Flow... spidey
Structure... spidey (you need to work on it tho)
Vocab... spidey (I liked it... I thought it was kinda tight)
Wordplay... spidey
Metas... tie
opening...lyrical
closer... spidey (wasn't that good tho)
personals... spidey

VOTE: Spiderman
Lyrical: up your vocab... work on punches
spidey: keep writing... you gettin' better.

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Voted For: Spiderman

hey yo this was no competiton. Spiderman took this battle easily. Better flow, harder punches and better wordplay.
No Hate
My Vote- Spiderman

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