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09-14-04, 05:31 PM | #1 | |||||||
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a few bars
IP: BAAD 84F0
ur a lil fiesty redy to fite me i bet rite now u dont like me hahha ur hatred doenst strike me, as unsual or evn uniue, cus i no u n ur beat,
pyschically menatally n emotinally, u need a massage go to her hous en say "lotion me", n if ur luky ul get da rub down evn da rub up n den dwon agen, n ur lil frend then will let u no when to but da covers over it n den make yo shit bend rappin naww snappin yea but what hapned?, nun my lips jus keep flappin, they wont stop, dam if only my dhit was hot, id drop da hottest shit rite on da spot, but my mind wont let me drop so i have to try to co-op, cus if i dont i will end up fukin up extreamly, but then she can whip cream me, n i can get all dreamy, n den shel see da real me, n leave me, sayin she cant bilieve me, but she can dieceive me, she cud fuck me but wudn recieve me, she can sieze me, but wit hed she jus CUD NOT please me Last edited by EmerginMc07 : 09-14-04 at 05:32 PM. Reason: it was not spaced enough |
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09-15-04, 10:14 AM | #2 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 0825 899A
uhhhhhh.....dunno what ta say.?!?!?!?!? it started of aight, but then its like u forgot the concept u were talkin bout.went from some1 bein mad at u, ta u talkin a nigga through mackin, ta someshit that wasn't even understandable. I'ont kno what ta say son??????I guess keep at it cuz. aight -1-
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09-15-04, 04:34 PM | #3 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: D26C 0847
i agree with the above statement
although there was a couple lines that kinda stuck out to me "pyschically menatally n emotinally, u need a massage go to her hous en say "lotion me", " |
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09-15-04, 04:35 PM | #4 | |||
Klassic
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IP: 3B20 6C52
i dont know u know u started kind tight but then u let it go, u should keep it goin cuz u just dropped a couple levels after the begginin
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09-15-04, 05:34 PM | #5 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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IP: 79FA 858D
Work On Ya Vocab
Elevate< Be Creative< Stay On The Topic And Your Flow Was Kind Of Basic Work On That Shit
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09-15-04, 11:57 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: BAAD 84F0
yo man it was 2 different things like i duno it wont let me space it aprt hold up heres da 2 different things so u can undastand it clearly
ur a lil fiesty redy to fite me i bet rite now u dont like me hahha ur hatred doenst strike me, as unsual or evn uniue, cus i no u n ur beat, pyschically menatally n emotinally, u need a massage go to her hous en say "lotion me", n if ur luky ul get da rub down evn da rub up n den dwon agen, n ur lil frend then will let u no when to but da covers over it n den make yo shit bend rappin naww snappin yea but what hapned?, nun my lips jus keep flappin, they wont stop, dam if only my dhit was hot, id drop da hottest shit rite on da spot, but my mind wont let me drop so i have to try to co-op, cus if i dont i will end up fukin up extreamly, but then she can whip cream me, n i can get all dreamy, n den shel see da real me, n leave me, sayin she cant bilieve me, but she can dieceive me, she cud fuck me but wudn recieve me, she can sieze me, but wit hed she jus CUD NOT please me |
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09-15-04, 11:58 PM | #7 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BAAD 84F0
fuck man this spacin shit is gay as fuck imma send 1 n anoutha
ur a lil fiesty redy to fite me i bet rite now u dont like me hahha ur hatred doenst strike me, as unsual or evn uniue, cus i no u n ur beat, pyschically menatally n emotinally, u need a massage go to her hous en say "lotion me", n if ur luky ul get da rub down evn da rub up n den dwon agen, n ur lil frend then will let u no when to but da covers over it n den make yo shit bend |
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09-15-04, 11:59 PM | #8 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BAAD 84F0
rappin naww snappin yea but what hapned?, nun my lips jus keep flappin, they wont stop, dam if only my dhit was hot, id drop da
hottest shit rite on da spot, but my mind wont let me drop so i have to try to co-op, cus if i dont i will end up fukin up extreamly, but then she can whip cream me, n i can get all dreamy, n den shel see da real me, n leave me, sayin she cant bilieve me, but she can dieceive me, she cud fuck me but wudn recieve me, she can sieze me, but wit hed she jus CUD NOT please me |
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09-16-04, 04:09 AM | #9 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: AB93 8F27
use heap of vocab and elevation and yah structure for yah flow is abit of a let down but kep at it
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09-18-04, 04:25 PM | #10 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BAAD 84F0
iite i preciate it
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09-18-04, 07:24 PM | #11 | |||||||
Thank You, Come Again
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IP: 1C81 276B
Ice Pcik basicaly siad it all
Elevate, Saty Creative nad On the Topic Show how oyur lines are speperated nad CLEARLY rhyme..... make it interesting 1/10 - BC
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09-19-04, 09:29 PM | #12 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BAAD 84F0
iite but i did rym!
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