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Old 09-20-04, 02:47 PM   #1
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Was jus thinkin n shit so...wrote up a lil sumthin n recorded it,i think it came out pritty good...as usual it coulda ben produced better but the lyrics an't clippin as much here

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Old 09-20-04, 02:56 PM   #2
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I don't like it.

The hook was Garbage.
Your flow is horrible. Too choppy.

Topic wise an lyrical wise good.
Now u just have to transform the text to audio.
Work on your flow and voice. Seem like ur tryin too hard. -1
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