I wish i could fly high in the sky
Wings spread out far soaring high
I wish i could fly high above the clouds
Away from my trouble and sins me not coming down
I wish i could fly get away from here
Away from my enemies the people that's here
I wish i could fly just fly all day
Saying by to my friends sayin hey to the day
I wish i could fly through sleet, rain, and cold
Fly when im young fly when im old
I just want to fly away from the bad
I want to be happy not being sad
I wish i could fly high in the sky
Wings spread out far soaring high


Just something i thought up

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No ones gonna stop me

nice easy goin drop right here. It was kinda wierd cuz I seen ur icon and sig and it looks all like "who want beef" and everything and then u got this easyfeelin poem. but over all nice break from all the beef and conflict flyin around but, over all descent drop I was feelin, and yea, I wished I could fly once

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Myth
MC Prephickz
Mistah_Tate

"Wif him I feel no more pain/ Like I been baptized in novacain/"
------Genisis

thx fo da feedback

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No ones gonna stop me

chia no doubt, keep up them drops nigga

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ILL Philosophy::::
Myth
MC Prephickz
Mistah_Tate

"Wif him I feel no more pain/ Like I been baptized in novacain/"
------Genisis

upping for more feedback on my poem

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No ones gonna stop me

i feel you, i think like that sometimes, umm, nice little poem, seemed too structured though, too cut and dry, i liked it though, no hate here, just giving the truth to my opinion, i feel you coulda said more, or used more vocab, but pretty decent overall

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