Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-29-04 at 12:54 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

jmsbnd07655 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 01:00 PM.

My tentative style gets Elusiv G thinking my flows are injected
Yo man, are you stupid, its jus me getting you lyrically infected
Are you disrespected? Right now you’re undeniably layin down your death wish
My rhymes hit you in different places and get you feelin dyslexic, im hectic
Elusiv G, im makin you out as a monstrosity
Possibly, im killin your ass, and lyrically putting you through poverty, you fond of me?
Im literally signin the paper for your rap verse resignation
What’s up wit all of dis playa hatin, and lyrically fakin!?
I’ll lubricate your rhymes with James Bond's mass lyrical production
I’ll also make you intellectually futile so you don’t have any function!
“Elusiv!” what’s that about im bein metaphorically conclusive
im so ill, I don’t even need to finish when I use this!
you’re gonna be so battered you’ll need radiotherapy
when I cleverly hit you with rhymes so steadily and heavily, you cant measure me,
Elusiv, I’ll stun you with my weaponry, I’ll throw seventy,
Shots at you, while im getting my vocal pedigree

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 11:10 AM.

yo yo yo yo yoyo.....

I can c this is 1 of yo 1st battles, well' ima leave u rattled
I rock ebonic phonics, mo sonic than niggaz in seattle
Wats up with jmsband,like obie u shud hav no rap name,
Its destructing yo game, puttin your wack ass 2 shame
Its 2 easy 4 niggaz to rip, with it they can kick, sik lyrical shit
The fact your new to R.V, means i gotta kill u uncompassionatley
Ima start wit mic mathematics, yo created rapper powered by ur weak pneumatics
Well ima baffle mic mathematics, , leave him standin static
Deplete ur remaining 34 health, u cudn't hide even wit stealth
U got 17posts to yo name, well ima tear wat u got outta tha frame
Physically cripple ur excuse 4 game, cos ur lyrical roars like a cubs, are tame
Joined septemba 2004, ur 1st battle result is u left on tha floor
Sittin on your knees, pleadin with tha Elusiv G
U shud hav neva tested me, like w.ryder u aint got skills to steal a win from tha G
u cudnt post a gd verse if u had 2 extra days, ima leave u in disarray
Born in tha UK, im ashamed 2 b tha same, cos ur rhymes are softer than wet clay
Fronting big,ur like a cheap rip-off of gucci, u shud b called cuchi
Ur text record is 0-0 well soon its gonna b 0 wins and loss 1
Cos ima like Jet Li on Rv, so ur testin The One

hey yo thats a nice rhyme.....it flows and u got bare multis....shame theres no punches or personals but u got skills

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same wit u, nice flow nd gud punches, i've looked at sum of your other battles, you've got sum nice rhymes

upppiiinnn........................................ ............................

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Aight Dis An Good Battle

Elusiv G U Had Punches Vocab And Wordplays And Personals


Jmsbnd (what Kind Of Name Is Dat Lol)

U Had Good Punches And Good Flow I Think Elusive G Will Win Dis Becuz Of Harder Punches

Voted For: Elusiv G

nice battle
punches-elusiv
pers-elusiv
strture-none
lyked-elusiv
best verse elusiv
winner-elusiv
pz out

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Voted For: jmsbnd07655

damn......honestly ima give ths one to u dawg....

E...ya shit was kinda funny the way it was structured..first 2 bars looked reuglar...then the next ones were seperated by commas...if u dont see what im sayin then...o well...i wasnt really feelin those punches tho man..damn dat closer was played man...started wit some vocab but still you werent consistant...you still need to elevate...

J....ya shit was nice...i was feelin ya good wrodplay and vocab...BUT....lyrical threats are played now...ya punches were ok...they could be betta tho..ya structure was kinda stretched so work on that...but yea u had a good verse...

overall....you both did ok G coulda did betta tho....but still dont let my opinion stop what yall doin cuz yall do have potential...but somebody gotta get the vote...

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[.Diabolic:.]

ye bout my username, i didnt know that woz gonna b my name in the forums and stuff, so i put it as anythin!

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Voted For: Elusiv G

elusive took dis in my opinion cuz he had mad personals.....he has a nice flow to it....but he took it 2 me...the other guys verse was iight just not as good to me he had nice vocab tho....
return da favor me vs.lyrical madness
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