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09-25-04, 10:42 PM
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I have a lot to learn...
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Real shit... hope ya feelin me on this
IP: 48EA 7C3F
Yo, if you ever got ya car in front of mine fuck ill have ya whole crew rolled Fuckit when im stuck in traffic, then i get home and my FUCKIN FOODS COLD im hungry as shit, aint had a good meal in a month n a bit.. think ive lost it Cos im stuck on freezer food n noodles.. plain, like McHotcakes without syrup on it.. Man... i need some good food.. To keep my brain on, and look sporty.. But im outta SD for a while.. so my girl aint around to cook for me.. too hard to get shit.. always cold.. cos the traffic out here is relentless .. italians dope.. but shitty quality.. gettin GOOD food delivered = too expensive na'mean?
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09-25-04, 11:35 PM
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IP: 8636 A384
that was kinda funny.....i liked it......but ya gotta know how ta cook for yaself.....ya know?i take it you haven't rapped in a while......cuz you came weaker than usual....lol.....don't worry.....happens to me too....crit my open mic "I Pray"
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=151605 just copy and paste that to your adress bar nice shit tho.....peace
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09-25-04, 11:35 PM
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IP: 8636 A384
or n/m.....it showed up as a link....lol
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09-26-04, 12:14 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
^word... yeah i wrote it after i got home and my food was cold... i was cut.. but yeah... i can cook, but everything i cook is shit..
of course its weak... its about food! word! ima go check your shit out now.. one
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09-26-04, 01:08 AM
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Better than you..
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IP: 01C3 560C
haha this shit was amusing...nice entertaining drop band.
7.5/10
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09-26-04, 01:12 PM
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IP: 8636 A384
shit i forgot to rate this.....lol....i give it 7.5 or 8/10.....i liked this....lol thanx for tthe feedback on my shit...peace
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09-26-04, 01:32 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 28AD 5545
it was ok but i didn't like the little print and some wack lines i say 6/10
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