Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
No D/R
House Rules

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-16-04 at 12:09 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

BANG has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 12:15 AM.

Raphael has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 12:16 AM.

Only person U could 'BANG' would be Ur bro...
And only time you actually didn't 'suck',is when he brought a ho...
Only time U 'threw' punches was wit Ur fam,juss 'CUZ' U were 'FISTEN' em...
And the only way you could win.....is if U hacked my system!!
'Smack' into Ur jaw...until you drop cold....
Shit,if U claim U 'spit' illness,your right,I'm completly covered in mold!!

Aight half ass wack drop.3rd battle I dropped in today.Goodluck.

I give to fucks about what you say
cus what you say nigga is what you say
and what I say -You probably hear everyday
nigga- I dont play no games- so dont even think about speakin my name/
talkin bout bang you talkin bout bitches- them gang signs you bangin - nigga keep'm in the pictures/ I told ya I aint playing wit'ya, you wish for win- nigga you probably got a bottle that blue genie be in/ So Raph-I-L pun intended- im wastin time wit ya ass- Damn why I spend it? Bitch nigga

Uppin for dem bloodclot votes aight

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"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

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Voted For: Raphael

stronger punches,humour was koo....structure n flow was aight...some original punches but some played but koo enough for the win...bang your punches lacked n it seemed some had no point at all....try n structure your lines better n work on ya punches so there personal...no hate....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

LOL aight whateva muh fucka. This muh fucka gonna try and critiqe my shit when his shit is just horrible.

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"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

"We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body"

uppin 4 votes... fuk i murdered this cat with my lowest level!!

weak battle nigga.

punches- raphael
personals- neither
multis- neither
metas- neither
word play- raphael
flow- raphael

Raphael u need help in vocab. the only, the only, the only, repetetiveness. weak punches so really just elevate.

Bang u need help wit vocab too nigga. u barely had any punches in there if any, and work on your structure for those people who will count it against u.

Raphael:
"Only time U 'threw' punches was wit Ur fam,juss 'CUZ' U were 'FISTEN' em...
And the only way you could win.....is if U hacked my system!!" decent punch.

Bang:
I didnt find anythin worth repeatin.

v/raphael if i could vote

uppin...^why didnt U vote?

up in this shit.

uppin this shit

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"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

"We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body"

Voted For: BANG

BANG...
Ya got this...

not the stronget battle ya'll, BANG, improve structure, ya flow was everywhere, but after i read it u had some aight humour n wordplay...u got my vote fa sho..

Raphael, ya opener was a lil weak, never really had personals either, not that bad of a drop tho, the finisher was aight n u used metas pretty decently, no hate just step ya game up playa...

return the favor in my sig

p e a c e

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